ZoomConcept Reviews
Positive Feature Layout
Nice use of hierarchy and overall layout, well organized.Summary:
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Michael Aagaard commented:Hi Lisa. Thank you very much for pointing out the blank review. It was certainly not my intention. I actually spent a while writing the comment. I must have made a rookie misstake forgot to save the note before i posted the review.
I have of course gone back and updated the review with my comments.
Thanks for your help.
- Michael
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Minor Problem Graphics
Didn't get the logo right off the bat but I like it. Maybe there's a way to make the runway metaphor into the key business areas, rather than using the balloons. Also, the texture you added to the balloons takes away from the clean look you are going for.Positive Feature Architecture looks right
Your value proposal is in the right place and concise, leading immediately to a customer action. (sign-on ?) and the headers + video looks effective as reasons to believe. good job.Summary:
I like the graphics you've used here (although i think they should be a little bit smalller) but i think you need a key for them above the box's.
Minor Problem on http://landingpages.nu 1 The 'plane & runway' is too small and seems a bit tired (sorry) as a visual analogy. Perhaps something that shows what the service offers in terms of benefits, i.e., easy experimentation to achieve optimized results; math/statistics; chemistry/biology). Serious Problem on http://landingpages.nu 1 This graphic doesn't adequately explain the benefits...I am assuming this is the Danish equivalent of unbounce.com. The rainbow color scheme could be used, but perhaps in overlaying bars/steps to a goal. Also, perhaps you can leverage the familiar Google Analytic goal funnel graphics, with a colorful rainbow twist New Idea on http://landingpages.nu 1 My Danish is not very good but this looks like a strong benefit. Perhaps this should be highlighted more on the top of the page. Other on http://landingpages.nu 1 If these are for explainer videos than, good. Testimonial videos, also good. Summary:
Good concept but an increasingly crowded field. I think you should examine the styles/precedents established by unbounce.com and LiveBall.com to get further insights and ideas on how to better position your product/service. Good luck!
Michael You won't get reviews if you don't review yourself ... one of your five reviews is blank. Not considered good form over here... please think about editing it... You will be amazed how much others are prepared to put in for you if you do a little work yourself...
I noticed you have done a couple of excellent reviews ... so I know you can!
Lisa