Alignment is bad
it's not an original design
and it doesn't work
"Rosckstar NOT working" LOL!!!
| Serious Problem on 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Is this your brand/domain or just a design element, because it can cause confusion |
| 2 | This is one of the most important parts of your website dont wast it on just HELLO |
| 3 | Let people click through to another page wich explains your service a little more then in just 3 lines. |
| 4 | Exchange this for your phone number/email |
| 5 | You want people to hire you, make this more prominent, or put buttons on your site that gets them here! |
| 6 | Dont let them leave your site unless its realy needed, try to keep them on your site by making a subpage with more information about the project. |
Hello Ahmad,
I realy like this design, it is original, well layed out and grabs the atention. I have some things for you to consider though:
These are some things for you to consider.
Geert I don't why you bothered, Ahmed has not bothered to give feedback for others…
thank you geert got you feedback, the rockstar working logo is my domain brand.
Aaran sorry for you, i'm noob here and i miss with the reviews, sorry.
Geert - you give great reviews, but some of the folks you review don't deserve any feedback, they leave blank reviews so they can post their concepts. Just a suggestion, but before giving a review, if you could take a look at the users profile to see if they themselves have been contributing to CF would help the community become stronger. :-)
Rebecca and Aaran, I see your points, but i come here to give reviews because i like doing it. I dont want to do a background check everytime to see if i can or cant write a review. I will try to check it a bit more, but cant promise anything :)
Geert - I also like giving reviews. And I think other members would agree when I say that having to do "background checks" before giving someone feedback sucks.
This site could not work if the majority of its members left blank reviews.
Ahmed - You've apologized for being a noob, but haven't actually gone back to write good reviews. There is no excuse now. Three people have told you how the site works. You are a good designer and probably have some great advice for others - why not use it? Prove your worth (and I will gladly delete my posts).
Geert - you write great reviews! Ahmed, look at how beneficial Geert's review is (specifically its level of detail and thoughtfulness) and try to do the same. You will benefit much more in the long run.
Problem is Geert it is people doing this ... i.e. not giving reviews that have almost killed this community off. People start to get hacked off when they get spammy reviews because it wastes everyones time. That is why everyone is piling in here... we don't want concept feedback to go down the tube ... it is too special!
I think someone has a way to give advice or criticism of one's design.
I think someone has a way to give advice or criticism of one's design.
sorry in advance if my previous reviews on empty. Cheers.. ^_^
concept feedback already seems like it is going down hill, how can Geerts review be any good if he gives this design a 5? WTF thats the best score you can get, and this design is so uninspiring, unoriginal and done to death... a lot of the experts on here are over rating everything
Maybe you should try to read it and not decide if its any good on the rating i give (and how you disagree with it).... Then you would see that im not a designer but a marketeer and comment only on marketing/usability problems. I think sites like this go downhill because people dont read, and are egotripping about taste... wich... i recall... is still personal!
| Minor Problem on 1.jpg | |
| 1 | a little busy? ...maybe |
| Critical Problem on 1.jpg | |
| 1 | the inward shadows dont make sense |
It's beautiful, I like it a lot. It is not very creative, and as I always say, that is fine except you are a designer.
I mean this is part and parcel of current web trends, you got your colorful top with a "photo"slider with 3-d shadows. nice balance of gray and very grid-like structure. You got it all, and yes it is damn pretty.
I just posted a near replica of this. Perfectly workable for my client, but for a designer...YET..I really like it...so.. I am only deducting "strategy".
so unoriginal and boring... I don't know your always rank designs so high Alex... you leave the designer nothing to strive for
My designs actually do not do well. Here is a particularly sad example:
http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept-page/5571/latino-festival/
However, me final designs are almost always a hundred times better.
look, your design will live on its own, and NONE of your clients will tell you how they feel about it, they simply will love it and call you or hate it and move along.
I rather take the harsh criticisim here than in the open world man.
Take it easy my friend. Besides. I LIKED YOUR DESIGN!!
ups, sorry... i leave it blank again.. ^^V
I've said before, I like the image slider in combination with blue and pink colors as describing when I'm happy and when I'm in love. :D
but for the color of its contents, what can I say, just like the color of drowning. how about adding a little color to the contents.
Please read comments above ... I was about to review your page ... but I won't now.
@Lisa : Thank you.. ^^
Woops! Sorry... I didn't realize it was an empty review when clicking "submit".