ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on RollWit.Me.png 1 Well you are showing it in motion so I think better if you drop the idea of showing shadow... or there should be momentum in shadow as well -
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Haider Ali commented:thanks Ezequiel...
2 shadow is too thick.. it should be supporting to show the motion... may be increase opacity to make it more subtle New Idea on RollWit.Me.png 1 Font also should have some gradient to support the gradient used in symbol Summary:
Hi Ezequiel,
This looks so nice to me apart from some small modification.
I did a quick revisions and I hope this may be a help for you.
Regards, Haider
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Geert Buskes commented:This one is nice. Keeps it simpler and much more usable! I would definetly polish up this one and use it :)
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Hey Ali! Thanks a lot for your review and mock. My only concern is "Me" readability on your version. Wouldn't it be hard to read if the logo gets smaller?
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Hendra Van Niekerk commented:I also like the mock-up, it is lighter and love the color effect on one panel.
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Mmmh, but I think I'd rather use it on rolling bug's head instead of randomly.
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Aaran Casey commented:To be honest I think Eze's version feels more natural, the purple tail looks out of whack and I find it hard to read the .me in the tail…
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Haider Ali commented:
Hi Ezequiel... Sorry got late to revert back :(
I agree with you about the readability issue and I think you can pull out "me" from symbol to make it more readable. This logo is really fantastic and it's only need a bit more love and time so that you can add more depth in it. Finally you are going to be master of "RollWit" and it's going to be your child so take care of it till it's groom. You are the daddy Man :)
Aaran, I agree with your point and I think Ezequiel going to take care on this point.
Happy CFing :)
Thanks, Haider
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It's all the things you are aiming for, my only crit would be the choice of font… and the name kinda reminds me of 50 cent, but other than that, I likey!
Great Job!
PS based on the font link I pasted into the comments under Tim's review I did a real quick mock-up see below
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Thanks man! I agree about the name and font. After trying a few the client chose this one (not my favorite). Maybe after seeing the feedback he can take a 2nd thought about it.
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Close to right on. Here are two suggestions on how this already good logo can be improved.
Consider a slab serif font. I'm thinking of Rockwell Italic Bold, but others would work as well. The serifs will help communicate the forward motion of rolling. Slab serifs are really popular and cool right now. I don't normally recommend trendy fonts for a logo, but for your audience, I think it would be appropriate. The sans serif you are using feels lifeless and sterile, definitely not the cool and fun image you are after.
Secondly (and this is minor), increase the brightness in the purple by 5 – 10 percentage points.
The artwork is awesome!
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Hello Tim, I totally agree with you regarding the font, I tried serifs ones in some previous versions but the client didn't digg them. I'll show him all the reviews and perhaps he can make up his mind. Thanks man!
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Aaran Casey commented:
What about this? http://www.losttype.com/font/?name=ranger - i Think this could look quite funky, especially if you gave the character a similar type treatment!
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Awesome. will check how it look and share with you all.
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Tim Sullivan commented:Aaran, Thanks for the link to this site. I didn't know about it.
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Minor Problem on RollWit.Me.png 1 font should be more aggressive and with some highlight and some small shadows Critical Problem on RollWit.Me.png 1 to much grey color, try other color Positive Feature on RollWit.Me.png 1 nice illustration New Idea on RollWit.Me.png 1 try increase light and shadow 2 add reflect or increase depth with more shadow effect Summary:
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Luke Van Lathum commented:Dont add a reflection!! that is old school, i prefer the little shadow under the ball thing
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Thanks Ettore for your review! I'm afraid I agree with Luke here regarding the reflection though.
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Minor Problem on RollWit.Me.png 1 The edges do look a little harsh on here 2 Think you could lose this... Positive Feature Hilly?
Could make it a little hilly to add a little visual interest ...Positive Feature on RollWit.Me.png 1 Like that this is not a perfectly round ball. Like the eybrow and the purple eye. New Idea Make the bug more bug like
Maybe the bug would be more bug like with bug like arms and legs ?Summary:
Have to say I like it .... this is fun and funky. I like the blurry look of the version done by one of the reviews below too.
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Hi Eze - I love it... Very first thing that popped in my mind was possibly put some space between the eyeball section and the section below it to give him a mouth? Kinda like he's about to chomp on something? I dunno, that may be too "pacman-ish". But like I said, it's the first thing that popped into my head.
Overall, I Like it! It's clean, simple, & the message comes across... Rebecca :-)
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Hey Rebecca! Thanks for your feedback. It's supposed to be a rolling bug http://ih0.redbubble.net/work.387490.4.flat,550x550,075,f.rolling-i.jpg. Perhaps I have to emphasize that somehow.
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Rebecca Perry commented:my bad...now I get it! a rollie pollie (that's what my daughter used to call them)
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Ezequiel Jaime commented:
Oh no! I had the "mouth" impression as well, but wasn't sure if it was just me. I really think I do have to fix that somehow.
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Critical Problem drop the shadow it seems like it is floating -
Ezequiel Jaime commented:
That's intentional.
Positive Feature color choice is intresting, more purple would be nice. intresting icon choice. New Idea make title bigger and icon smaller -
You have a good point on this one.