ZoomConcept Reviews
Serious Problem on uitnodiging.jpg 1 The photo stands out here, it could be more integrated. Positive Feature on uitnodiging.jpg 1 I realy like this, the color of the fence comming back in the box 2 If this gets cut out, it would be brilliant :) 3 I like the font, but will it be readable enough? Summary:
Hello
I find it hard to comment on this one, because i focus on website usability mainly. But i realy like this design. The background details and fonts are very nice. They only thing im not sure about is the color choises. I see you tried to make the colors of the foto match the colors of the box on the outside. But i cant find this on the inside. I think if you spend a little more effort to this (getting the right color tones of the foto's into the box (or the other way round, playing with hue/saturation settings) the piece will look much more as a whole and i think it will look better that way.
Also about the colors: i think your customers chose them, but if not, i would choose a little more downtoned colors
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Geert Buskes commented:Im Dutch (Nederlands) indead. How about a black box with the supporting colors? Or would that be to dark for a wedding :)
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Geert Buskes commented:
*Indeed...
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Hendra Van Niekerk commented:
I am proudly Afrikaans, my Nederlanders in SA hehe. I tried black, but it became to dark and did not blend in well with the "fotos".
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Geert Buskes commented:
I would then definetly go with the darker version. The photo's blend in much better here! Maybe there's another way you can integrate the photo's better, by makeing them fade away over the edges, i dont know how this will look but it might make for an interesting design feature. But this depends on how the fade gets done. Maybe you can fade out only over a certain part of the decals. (Just an idea)
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Positive Feature Some suggestions...
In concept, I like the idea of a box, though other than a place to house a chocolate, am wondering what the value is of having it in that shape? Also, the copy is not very clear and legible - possibly greying out/white-washing the image behind it will allow the text to come through more clearly...Summary:
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Hendra Van Niekerk commented:
There will be 4 loose pages inside the box with all the details of the wedding inside. The text on the onside will be the bottom of the box, just there if someone decides to look there, not important.
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Minor Problem on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Try to use some shades or maybe a artistic flowers pattern 2 a shadow on text Minor Problem on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Hard to read 2 Detail does not work here 3 Don't cut off hands ... maybe move bodies up a bit ... hands and rings are key in weddings! Minor Problem on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Bit boring Minor Problem on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Hard to read 2 Not sure about color scheme Positive Feature on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Lovely 2 Lovely Positive Feature on uitnodiging.jpg 1 Love this 2 Like colors Summary:
I really like this ... would have loved it for my wedding!
think I would combine the right option on page 1 and the left option on page two. So you have a very readable inside and a more picture based outside ... if that makes sense....
Don't really like the third option at all.
Sure they are going to love it.
Lisa
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Lisa Tweedie commented:P.s. like the patterns and the hands reminds me of henna and weddings.
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The print is hard to see. Perhaps choose another simpler font or simpler background. I like the darker colour background better as it makes the images pop more.
From a personal standpoint, I think the box and the chocolate is a neat idea but I'm not sure if I would choose it for wedding invitation or more of a wedding favor...
It would be helpful for reviewing purposes if you can upload an image of what it looks like when made into a box.
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Hi I would combine your designs and overlay the lightly patterns and the imagery on the side panels. I would say though that the finished article may look different from flat. is there no way of making a mockup and upload images of that?
The colors unfortunately is the theme of the wedding, why they chose 2 colors, well that is what Brides does. She did say she I can use black. So I was thinking on using black on the inside panels. And the turquoise on outside? Number 2 will be cut out. It is a overlapping panel. The box is about 12cm in diamator, so text will be readable.
Are you Afrikaans/Nederlands/Duits, I saw you write photos as I do sometimes with it being foto?