ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 I am not sure about this graphic. It looks out of place. Maybe just extend the rays from the graphic for texture and visual interest. 2 I like this area and the division between blue and green. I would maybe introduce another color in the headers to help with your text hierarchy. Serious Problem on Screenshot-We would like to know more about you - Mozilla Firefox-1.png 1 The inner pages need a lot of work. There is just not a lot going on here visually. You should include the green bottom in the background with the same rolling hill line. Also, you should try to introduce more color. What about having the buttons for the different types of content economy, finance, etc. each a different color. Positive Feature on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 This is a very engaging graphic! Positive Feature on Screenshot-News - Mozilla Firefox-2.png 1 I like these icons. New Idea on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 Too much contrast. I like the blue, I just think it would look better if the dark color was a bit lighter. The logo does not stand out very well. 2 This doesn't seem to fit in the layout. It doesn't align with the content below. It would look better if it was wider, filling in the horizontal space, and all in the blue area. Summary:
This is a good start. You have a lot of good design elements, but overall it lacks cohesion. The biggest thing for me is that there is just too much contrast between the light blue, and the stark white form and content interiors.
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Minor Problem on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 If these are suppose to be headings, give them some space. All text a little bigger text-size need to be emphasized with the right spacing. Minor Problem on Screenshot-We would like to know more about you - Mozilla Firefox-1.png 1 This looks good but it would be better as aligned to left. Critical Problem on Screenshot.png 1 Oh NO, too much space there mate. Positive Feature design is fresh
Beautiful, creative, simple. Love it. Colors look so natural.Positive Feature on Screenshot-News - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 Cool! Summary:
I like it generally, just design small issues here and there.
Positive Feature on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 nice texture and grafik New Idea on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 looks a little bit boring... perhaps a text-shadow would be better New Idea on Screenshot-We would like to know more about you - Mozilla Firefox-1.png 1 use color to identify the headings 2 perhaps use different colors for odd and even rows -
Lee Sinclair commented:Great idea, thanks
New Idea on Screenshot-News - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 you want this? New Idea on Screenshot.png 1 use another color for the background! it looks dirty not clean... Summary:
Good design but nothing really special...
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Minor Problem on Screenshot-We would like to know more about you - Mozilla Firefox-1.png 1 first line with light color, second line with other color darker ? Minor Problem on Screenshot-News - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 background color (blue or green) instead of grey ? 2 work on the button, with background and round corner ? Serious Problem on Screenshot-We would like to know more about you - Mozilla Firefox-1.png 1 style with color wich recall home page Summary:
Hello, Your first page has a funny look, with bright colors, much less the other pages. If you want to stay in the same trend, despite the entry forms, you should work on the style of the textarea and inputbox, with rounded corners, shadows internal borders of the input fields. For buttons, you can re-use the blue button on the home page, with rounded corners to recall the design of the home page.
As said Karsten, cheeks more about the colors, a blank line, a line in light blue for example.
Minor Problem on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 The Logo isn't really in a good place. Also it's too small or the background color over this are should be much lighter so that you can see the Logo better. Critical Problem on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 What's this about? I imagine users coming to this Website. Why should they sign-up which reason do you give them? What's this site about? There should at least be a Tour with the stuff that you can do over there and with compelling features... Positive Feature on Screenshot-enliten - Mozilla Firefox.png 1 This whole Sign up Section looks to complicated for me. It should be smaller and the Sign-up Button much bigger. and only two fields: E-Mail + Passwort. The User can change the Name later after the login... Summary:
Interesting Design but I don't know what's this about and the Sign-Up Area is too big in my opinion...
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Lee Sinclair commented:
thanks for honest and effective feedback
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Minor Problem maybe try extending the rays on the right further out. Positive Feature fade
i really like the fade, good work.
For some reason the icons and headings don't match what I was trying to select for Positive Feature, Minor Problem, Serious Problem, etc. I don't know if this is a common problem or just me? Sorry if it is confusing or annoying, but I couldn't get it to work right.