ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Too wordy
Use design to break this up a bit.Critical Problem Well done for posting a wireframe
Well done for posting a wireframeSummary:
Despite the fact that you are aiming this at SEO's ... I think you need to be a little clearer in what this site is for. I would actually use the words "Search Engine Optimization (SEO)" somewhere on the page
And other acronyms like MR & PR. You are excluding a lot of people by not explaining yourself.
I guess this is a landing page. Might give more than one option of places to go. i.e. more info or explanations. They say up to three calls to action is fine.
Need to build a bit more trust ... few logos of organizations you are involved with etc.
Target market is clear Next action clear Expect to see a table of pricing ... but as I said I would like more options from this page.
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Alex Colina commented:Dis agree..... (-:=
I know SEO, I want this. If he started to educate people here he might loose me (a sure sale) for a noob (ehhh)
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Danny Gonzalez commented:
Alex, this product is targeted to people like you. I got 2 questions for you.
How high of a priority is this to you?
What factors are the most / least important to you when deciding on buying something like this?
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Robert Hubbs commented:I agree with Alex. The more you explain the less cred you have.
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Summary:
I presume this is a conversion page, so not to much about logos and navigation. in that sense it is a very, very good start.
Call to action is very well if this is the final color scheme. Although I would put it above the presentation points.
Are the benefits clear? YES
Is the target market clear?ABSOLUTELY (if you are not educated about this you will not get it and move on. however it might be interesting to add a "what is this about" link to the bottom, if it does not reduce performance it might actually increase sales to the uneducated. whatever you do though, do not try to educate people here. this is fantastic)
Is the next action clear? 100%
What do you expect to be on the next page after clicking? what is says, nothing more nothing less
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Michelle Rauh commented:I think a little "what is this about" link is a good idea, even if the person ends up not being interesting it's still getting the concept out there and your site more known which is never a bad thing.
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Minor Problem High Quality
High quality is the issue. You should say just that Buy and Sell High Quality Links Overall I like the clean straightforward look and to the point design. You know your target audience – keep it simple. As for how important it is really depends on the SEO. Some think it is huge. In the past I focused on finding good quality links that were not easily had. Ones that others could not buy and sell. But that was just me.Summary:
Like the clean direct feel.
Summary:
benefits = unclear target market = unclear next action = completely unclear, sorry to say
Why not say exactly what you've written below? "This is a website designed to be a market place for SEO's to buy and sell etc...
Serious Problem Create a min navigation too
If I was a user, I would be looking for more options like "koncept", "testimonials" and so on.Critical Problem This may be me but...
I hate comic sans....but it's just my preference, man it's ugly but it does has a very casual feel. Which is what I assume you are going for.Other I think
It seems to me this is about buying links or buying the tool/software that will provide you with the links you want? If this si somewhat accurate you have done well, because I have no idea what SEO is.Next Page
To answer your question, I would expect the next page to be the information i need to become part of the market. As in make an account, view features, etc.Summary:
I have no idea what SEO's but I think if I did this would make more sense. Overall, it feel very open and direct to the audience. for some reason though, I do feel like it's a lil cheesy but then again, that just the type font.
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Michelle Rauh commented:
By the way, the dashboard sample pic you have appears to be very user friendly for its purpose.
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Positive Feature Call to Action Button
The call to Action button is clear and conciseSummary:
I'm not 100% sure the purpose of the site, but perhaps the target will understand. "Only previously filtered..." seems wordy. Benefits are clear, but should be more precise. The Target Market is clear. The next action is clear, and I expect to see some type of pricing chart on the next page.
Thanks. I'll add that to the mock. What companies do you think would make sense to include for trust symbols/logos?