ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-08 at 10.39.20 AM.png 1 Duplicate text -
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Kevin Govro commented:
fixed
Positive Feature on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.43.08 PM.png 1 The title stands out well and has a good font New Idea on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.43.37 PM.png 1 Make these elements linkable -
Kevin Govro commented:
great idea
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Kevin Govro commented:
fixed
Summary:
I like the background drawing style and I think that the colors of the website are soft and pleasing and match the subject of the site well.
Page loading is a little slow because of the large background images.
Front page:
- The title stands out well and draws the eyes to it
- The popup text when hovering seems a little weird to me
- Not directly clear that this site is about a book
- Also i would put a clear link to the book on amazon on the front page
Contact page:
- I recommend styling the send button according to the rest of the website.
- There is duplicate text on contact page under "Booking" and "Donate"
Purchase page:
- Layout seems a bit random. It's a little chaotic for the eyes because all elements screem for attention at once, so i would reorganize things a bit.
- I expected that clicking the book cover images and the text "Get your copy today" would lead me to a purchase location.
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Kevin Govro commented:
very helpful thank you
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Minor Problem Improvements on the pictures
Pictures could be more incrusted in the backgroundPositive Feature Design well thinked
not that much information, good ! And colors are well choosenMinor Problem The photo of the girls needs to be white balanced, they seem too orange, also the gamma level is off. Critical Problem There is a grammatical mistake on the about page. The third sentence is a run-on sentence, break up into two. The sentence should end "delicate and loving manner", the comma makes it awkward to read. The line about the uncle toms cabin - the quote opens but never closes at the end of the sentence, also uncle toms cabin doesn't need quotes , unless uncle toms cabin is some kind of sarcastic/ironic reference. The line about the lord giving the task should not have a column, just a comma. Also, take out the two "thats" between "way" and "children" and between "and" and "will open" in the same sentence. Again, sounds awkward. Summary:
The black, heavy font combined with the stucco wall background, create a feeling of unease and generally presents itself as grim for a book that purports to "help spread the message of life" and is intended for children. I have not read the book, but I would guess that the message has something to do with the wonderful feeling of being alive and enjoying the things that life has to offer. In that case I would make the site a bit more cheerful, as the illustration of the smiling happy family seems to suggest.
Other on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png 1 actually, i don't the style, it looks like a little solemn and makes me feel depressive. Minor Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png 1 put a little shadow here.. Minor Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-08 at 10.39.20 AM.png 1 style it to to the right side..if you look upper you see have no place there! Serious Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png 1 put this more in th right side.. Critical Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png 1 is no in line try to be all in the same line.. if you use photoshop try the CTRL+" you see the grid!! New Idea on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.43.37 PM.png 1 Box the photos or put a little shadow to be a nice effect,Now is look like a static background. New Idea on Screen Shot 2011-08-08 at 10.39.08 AM.png 1 Will be nice here to put it in the box around..is looking to much static..
oops thats huge thanks so much