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| 1 | Duplicate text
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| 1 | The title stands out well and has a good font |
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| 1 | Make these elements linkable
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I like the background drawing style and I think that the colors of the website are soft and pleasing and match the subject of the site well.
Page loading is a little slow because of the large background images.
Front page:
Contact page:
Purchase page:
very helpful thank you
| Minor Problem | |
Improvements on the picturesPictures could be more incrusted in the background | |
| Positive Feature | |
Design well thinkednot that much information, good ! And colors are well choosen | |
| Minor Problem | |
| The photo of the girls needs to be white balanced, they seem too orange, also the gamma level is off. | |
| Critical Problem | |
| There is a grammatical mistake on the about page. The third sentence is a run-on sentence, break up into two. The sentence should end "delicate and loving manner", the comma makes it awkward to read. The line about the uncle toms cabin - the quote opens but never closes at the end of the sentence, also uncle toms cabin doesn't need quotes , unless uncle toms cabin is some kind of sarcastic/ironic reference. The line about the lord giving the task should not have a column, just a comma. Also, take out the two "thats" between "way" and "children" and between "and" and "will open" in the same sentence. Again, sounds awkward. | |
The black, heavy font combined with the stucco wall background, create a feeling of unease and generally presents itself as grim for a book that purports to "help spread the message of life" and is intended for children. I have not read the book, but I would guess that the message has something to do with the wonderful feeling of being alive and enjoying the things that life has to offer. In that case I would make the site a bit more cheerful, as the illustration of the smiling happy family seems to suggest.
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| 1 | actually, i don't the style, it looks like a little solemn and makes me feel depressive. |
| Minor Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png | |
| 1 | put a little shadow here.. |
| Minor Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-08 at 10.39.20 AM.png | |
| 1 | style it to to the right side..if you look upper you see have no place there! |
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| 1 | put this more in th right side.. |
| Critical Problem on Screen Shot 2011-08-07 at 9.44.20 PM.png | |
| 1 | is no in line try to be all in the same line..
if you use photoshop try the CTRL+" you see the grid!! |
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| 1 | Box the photos or put a little shadow to be a nice effect,Now is look like a static background. |
| New Idea on Screen Shot 2011-08-08 at 10.39.08 AM.png | |
| 1 | Will be nice here to put it in the box around..is looking to much static.. |
oops thats huge thanks so much