ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 Big, Black and ....space eater 2 To long for me -
James Clark commented:I do like this language as it's simple, but I'm going to think more about the length.
3 Where's footer? no content to fill up? than you dont know what your selling ;) or your product is bad, becouse you dont have much to say about it. -
James Clark commented:
Yes, haven't gotten to footer yet. Unsure if i will make it just a small band or larger as it is now and have links to more content.
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James Clark commented:
Oh, I didn't mention, I edited what I have now for the footer out of the image because it's incomplete.
4 On features view , you are using grey color. Here gold. No consistency -
James Clark commented:
Yes - I wanted the tour buttons to be learn more and when the user clicks have hidden content appear/drop down but couldn't get it to work so far. I had been thinking about if this was bad - to not be consistent. Thank you.
Minor Problem on http://www.kuluz.com/how-it-works 1 pictures to big, unless they will be sreenshots or videos -
James Clark commented:
Good point - I may have to stick with what I have to start, but what you say is better I'm sure - screenshots here in the future. This is tough for me - to represent the service and have it look very much like a product.
2 get started everywhere? to much -
James Clark commented:
Hmm...Maybe I will leave each without a button then until I can get a "Learn More" here that reveals more content. Unsure still.
3 A lot of text. Minor Problem on get-started.png 1 align -
James Clark commented:
yes, unsure which pricing table to go with (sign up button on bottom or on top - if I go with button on bottom would align it correct), I think I'll put that up for review here later on it's own once the rest of the site is a little better.
Positive Feature on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 nice -
James Clark commented:
Thanks - real ones will be in soon.
Positive Feature on http://www.kuluz.com/how-it-works 1 good navigation idea for features -
James Clark commented:
thanks - this actually slides in the next page, so very little time spent by site visitor waiting - using coda slider.
Positive Feature on get-started.png 1 clean layout New Idea on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 Get rid of Latest news..i wonder how offen you'll be adding them :) Use blog posts, tweets, facebook and other social media. Its good to have corporate blog , there you can write about updates. Integrate it with site and you will have your news. -
James Clark commented:
I think I'm going to take your advice here. My thought was to get changing content on the page to help w/ SEO but I'm not sure what to put next to it.
New Idea on http://www.kuluz.com/how-it-works 1 try to use different font size, weight, read about typography -
James Clark commented:
I will - typography is something I really appreciate but I'm not very good at it so far. Thanks.
New Idea on get-started.png 1 111 $ looks much better 2 Try to use colors for plans. Its little boring -
James Clark commented:
Good idea - I think I might A/B test this down the road. A more colorful one vs. the grey. I wonder which will do better.
Summary:
I would add some more informations that are not only empty text - try demo, video or sth that will ensure user, that this app is real deal. Features top is good, work on page layout. This left-right-left photo layout its not always good. As for sign up - best do A/B tests;) i would put it at the bottom (common solution), user should be allow to read benefits first, than sign up. But i may be wrong, , i dont have much expierience in conversions and sign up buttons ;)
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James Clark commented:
Thank you for taking the time to review. You make a lot of good points. Some I will fix right away. Others I will probably have to suffer with it not being addressed because there is much to do. I'll definitely come back to reread your comments. Thank you!
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James Clark commented:
Also thinking maybe I'll replace the lastest new with a 1-2-3 step to show what happens after signup to make the process clear to potential customers.
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Positive Feature Overall concept is nice and clean
I think you've done a good job of conveying the image you're after with the layout.New Idea Try putting the line chart on a light or white background
The line either needs to be thicker, or bigger, or a different type of chart...or you can simply draw a box underneath with a light or white background. Perhaps a small gradient in that.-
James Clark commented:
Yes, definitely. I was thinking that some of the first money I reinvest will be to have a pro redo the feature element.
Call to Action
I'm assuming there are multiple calls to action. The first two buttons should maybe be more prominent. That could be just a matter of increasing font size on the buttons. I was also thinking that the "Want to Grow Your Business?" was a call to action. If so, make it bigger and give some opportunity for action if the answer to that question is yes.Summary:
Your concept is good and your imagery and layout help with building that trust and professionalism. I'd focus on the calls to action and the other design elements mentioned in this review and other things already mentioned.
I really also like the fourth screenshot with the pricing grid. Again, more of a call to action here though.
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James Clark commented:
Thanks for taking the time to review! Good points - thanks for focusing on what I wrote in my description regarding goals/what my concerns were.
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New Idea fonts
try to add another font (you can use google fonts)Summary:
add also some sliders, slideshow for frontpage or something like this. i think it needs some animations
Minor Problem on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 This part is feeling a little off due to unbalanced whitepace, You can either introduce a small content area or make the Latest News Section Two column or something to utilize this whitespace. -
James Clark commented:
Yes, definitely - I was thinking of adding a small subscribe form, removing it all together or 2 columns of latest blog articles as you suggest. Thanks for taking the time to review!
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Rajesh Sharma commented:Glad I could help, Best of Luck!
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Serious Problem on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 put different pic? -
James Clark commented:
Hi Eileen,
People I have done work for are going to provide real testimonials - just put up dummy content for now.
Thank you for taking the time to review. Much appreciated!
New Idea on GrowTap-homev77.png 1 Different colors represent different content, terrific! -
Summary:
Great job overall. Nice grid. Everything fits in great. Maybe one small remark: your round images (below the header on the homepage) are not as bright as the header. Light them up!
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James Clark commented:
Yes, I was thinking of making the background a light grey instead of white so that images would pop more. Lighter is another option to consider. Unsure though still.
Thank you for taking the time to review!
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Yes, this is temp - I just added it so I could put it up here for review. Thought people might be distracted by blank space. I was thinking video but might have to wait on that. I think the black icon is bad too because people may confuse people - they may think it's an app.