ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on Poster_Small_V.png 1 To big, to much empty words with no background like picture or icon or shape Serious Problem on Poster_Small_V.png 1 only picture on poster...great message (i like this, not everyone remember this) but simple camera icon - similar to this at airports - will be much better imho New Idea on Poster_Small_V.png 1 change color of this element 2 change color ot this element Summary:
Picture is what attracts attention. You missing this here. I like font, color is also catching my eye, just missing a picture. Header and footer are nice. Phone number maybe has color to similar to text color
Positive Feature wider spacing in between writing to make it easier to read? but colours very eye catching and all the stuff you need to know is right there. -
Anthony R commented:good point. a little scrunched it is.
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Nothing would grab my attention. I would either add an image or bring "Lifestyle coaching for kids" into focus (rather than the company name).
Take a pic with phone - maybe use a QR code instead?
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Anthony R commented:
QR codes are for nerds. I don't think it would fit the mom demographic... but thanks I will think about adding it after doing some more research?
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Anthony R commented:
Also, good point about Coaching for kid being the biggest and making the logo smaller. I'll play with that thanks.
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New Idea Needs Image
I like the colors and the fonts. I just think you need a quality image.... a smiling kid or something. You know the saying... a picture paints a thousand words. To me... even though the colors and messaging works... I wouldn't notice this poster without some sort of graphic.Minor Problem Nice color scheme...
the font choice is very good tooMinor Problem on Poster_Small_V.png 1 It takes too much space Serious Problem on Poster_Small_V.png 1 Center aligning is not the best solution. In this case it's bad because not all items are aligned (eg: logo+motto) Summary:
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Anthony R commented:
Thanks for this. My question is what would be a better alternative for the layout?
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Florin Miu commented:I would try to left align all the text. Than you would have some space on the right to put a picture like Jakub suggested.
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It comes across as a normal poster. I wouldnt take a second look if I were to walk past it. You can play with the colors instead of 1 color for the entire poster. Insert in photos as beautiful photos grab attention. You might want to use 'louder' fonts for the header
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I agree with many above. Definitely, I would consider maybe making the whole background a closeup of a smileing child or something to that extent or a teacher with a child. Something that makes you look and say "aww that's nice". I would not use the present colors. Anything that reminds you of something not well is not an attraction.
I would work on a pic and fit the type nice to it. Allow the pic to draw attention of the viewer and the type to compliment it. I would maybe make what you have in white much smaller as well.
Alignment is right, centered, then left aligned, then centered again. It is better to stick to one choice and pretty much stick with it from there.
examples of a pic drawing attention in a poster:
http://dukecreative.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/1.jpg?w=500&h=636
And
http://www.toronto.ca/health/children/images/cpt_posters.gif
Another choice ( if a pic is out of question) may be to consider using primary colors to draw attention ( this lets the viewer know it's going to be information about kids.)
So, overall just a bit more work and all should be well.
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Sorry but this poster falls flat on the visual aesthetics. The message needs simplification too.
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Anthony R commented:
Would you mind giving me any more specifics on how I can fix it?
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Greg Thomas commented:One comment...strong advertisements typically begin with a leader and not the company name.
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