| Minor Problem on index.png | |
| 1 | I wonder how many panorama pictures will user have... |
| Serious Problem on index.png | |
| 1 | I dont see any difference between lines that has another level or hasn't. Mark if menu element have another menu inside. |
| 2 | Layout is just bad. I dont see exacly lines, that divide welcome part from our services part. |
| 3 | Who is describing services as whole blog post?:) There's a need for check list or sth. Allow user to give short names to serwices, short desc, and then "read more" button |
| 4 | I like style, but as for informations...this is empty footer. |
| Positive Feature on index.png | |
| 1 | I like this part, even i have no idea of it's purpose.. |
I dont pass 5 second test. Dont have and idea what this site is /will be about. Whole layout has many mistakes, like to whide photos, chaos in layout (something 1 columnt, something 2 column, then 3 column box) In general - work on it :) Cheers
| Minor Problem on index.png | |
| 1 | It looks like you're on the home page AND the portfolio page! |
| 2 | Way too much empty space here |
| 3 | Alignment is goofy here, flush it left |
| 4 | Overall the floating is weird in this section. Probably would be better off chopping off the column from floating under the image. |
| 5 | These text blocks are probably too long as well |
| New Idea on index.png | |
| 1 | Move this down into the footer empty area. It would fit nicely in that big empty space. |
| 2 | This probably would make more sense right aligned |
| 3 | I'm not sure doing the photo navigation of this section works. If it's a photography site it could be ok, but other than that it might be too distracting. I think you would be better off just doing straight cycle navigation. |
| Other on index.png | |
| 1 | Be careful on the flyout. Not sure if it's the only one you were planning on, but if you put one under Gallery for example, there won't be any room for it to the left. It would be confusing to the user if some fly one way and some the other. |
Going to be honest, there's not really much I like about this. A ton of problems and doesn't really do all that much well.
First, it's much too grid-based. Grids are good, but it looks very sectioned off and disjointed.
I'm not sure the color scheme really works too well. The burgundy/purple color and the green look ok together but I don't think it really works the way it's used.
Flyout dropdowns are not too fun to work with. They are a bit cool, but they can be tough to reign in as a user.
The layout is way too text-based. Obviously being a template it would depend on the user content, but it just has a very text-heavy basis (even with the big photo headers). It's probably too much to parse through for the audience.
Lastly, your call-to-action is fairly non-existent. The only thing close is the "Read more" button, but that is kind of hidden on the page and doesn't really give much information and could use a more active verb.
I think you would be better off restarting with everything below the header image. There is a ton of work to be done to make it really ThemeForest ready. It's not bad-looking, but it doesn't do much positively.
| Serious Problem | |
| Nice design, but needs improvements in positioning of elements, like images, text, buttons. | |
| Positive Feature | |
Spacing between elementsTry to play with padding and whitespace. | |
| The image in the slider is too short. It must have a greater height in my opinion. | |