ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v4.jpg 1 Header looks like from 2000 2 White text hard to read. Idea not bad, but work with contrasts Critical Problem on House-Butlers-v4.jpg 1 Whole fold is filled with crap informations. No indication about watching, seciurity. No mention of pros ! you should concetrate on that here. Make some statements like "Keep your home safe with us!" or sth Positive Feature on House-Butlers-v4.jpg 1 This part is nice, modern look. 2 Good idea, work on styling Summary:
Hi, As i wrote in title - all 3 designs doesnt says in 5 secs after looking, what this site is about. I see house , i see logo - house. Ok rental? House sale? There is no indication, that thiss site is about seciurity, watching, and keep safe. This is major mistake in my opinion.
As for design, 2 option is most modernt, but in general i saw that kind of sites a few years back. If that was not in purpose, than think of it as a mistake.
Minor Problem Option 2 is better
But the logo still feels very outdated. Try to make it more modern.Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v3.jpg 1 Background image seems unfitting for a house watching service. Positive Feature on House-Butlers-v3.jpg 1 Nice job with footer, everything looks good down there. Summary:
Try to modernize the site as much as possible, it is too outdated to be attractive.
Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v3.jpg 1 Seems as though its only a butler service. Try to use some security metaphors in the logo like a watchful eye, or surveillance camera, or even a lock (would have to be done creatively for its been used so much by other security companies) and incorporate a home. Critical Problem Better Images
Try using some images of retired couples on vacation. Maybe with a caption/headline like... "while you are living it up here, (picture of happy vacation)... you should't have to worry about what's going on here."(picture of single home, safe and sound.)Positive Feature Great Graphics!!! Needs better strategy Summary:
You did a very good job in capturing the atmosphere of the beach but feels like more of a scrap booking site or a beach home rental site like your first commenter said. I need to feel more security. Take a look at some other sites that offer different types of security services.
