| Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v4.jpg | |
| 1 | Header looks like from 2000 |
| 2 | White text hard to read. Idea not bad, but work with contrasts |
| Critical Problem on House-Butlers-v4.jpg | |
| 1 | Whole fold is filled with crap informations. No indication about watching, seciurity. No mention of pros ! you should concetrate on that here. Make some statements like "Keep your home safe with us!" or sth |
| Positive Feature on House-Butlers-v4.jpg | |
| 1 | This part is nice, modern look. |
| 2 | Good idea, work on styling |
Hi, As i wrote in title - all 3 designs doesnt says in 5 secs after looking, what this site is about. I see house , i see logo - house. Ok rental? House sale? There is no indication, that thiss site is about seciurity, watching, and keep safe. This is major mistake in my opinion.
As for design, 2 option is most modernt, but in general i saw that kind of sites a few years back. If that was not in purpose, than think of it as a mistake.
| Minor Problem | |
Option 2 is betterBut the logo still feels very outdated. Try to make it more modern. | |
| Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v3.jpg | |
| 1 | Background image seems unfitting for a house watching service. |
| Positive Feature on House-Butlers-v3.jpg | |
| 1 | Nice job with footer, everything looks good down there. |
Try to modernize the site as much as possible, it is too outdated to be attractive.
| Minor Problem on House-Butlers-v3.jpg | |
| 1 | Seems as though its only a butler service. Try to use some security metaphors in the logo like a watchful eye, or surveillance camera, or even a lock (would have to be done creatively for its been used so much by other security companies) and incorporate a home. |
| Critical Problem | |
Better ImagesTry using some images of retired couples on vacation. Maybe with a caption/headline like... "while you are living it up here, (picture of happy vacation)... you should't have to worry about what's going on here."(picture of single home, safe and sound.) | |
| Positive Feature | |
| Great Graphics!!! Needs better strategy | |
You did a very good job in capturing the atmosphere of the beach but feels like more of a scrap booking site or a beach home rental site like your first commenter said. I need to feel more security. Take a look at some other sites that offer different types of security services.