| Minor Problem on Homepage V1 | |
| 1 | Might lighten these up a bit, they really fade to the background. So much so I hardly noticed them. It's good they're not distracting, but perhaps a little too much so. |
| New Idea on Homepage V1 | |
| 1 | I like the call to action, and how to-the-point this is. However while it does stand off the page, I feel that it could do so a little better. Consider using box-shadow or something to help make it stand off of the background just a bit more.
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| Other on Homepage V1 | |
| 1 | Depending on the content of these frames, you might consider a roller over type of change with opacity as to prevent people from skipping over your call to action. Just be sure these don't over power it.
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Clear and Simple. I like the simplicity of the page, and how many of the elements do well to exist but not distract.
Closing thought: What's next? Would be great to see some concepts of what happens after the individuals information is collected.
Thanks for the feedback! - I'm going to put up some more concept soon to show the nav flow for users who've signed up
Could i ask which form you prefer? The one on homepage 1 Vs Hompage 2? I'm wondering if the square 'submit' button works better as a rectangle or not... it's all about the usability after all@
I like the rectangular one myself. The additional information in what I'm assuming is "Homepage 2" is nice, but it not quite as concise. My eyes don't feel like they've a place to land. Maybe tone back the background to reduce its contrast making it easier for people to 'land' somewhere?
| Minor Problem on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | This should be left-aligned |
| 2 | This should be right-aligned |
| 3 | These buttons are a bit goofy. I assume they allow scrolling through the thumbnails but I'm not sure it's really clear. I would try putting those controls on either side of the images and move the headline over to the left instead.
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| Serious Problem on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | This should be rephrased to really emphasize the benefit to the target. The reason people sign up isn't going to be because "Getcast has..." it will be because "You'll get..." or something to that extent. Make this statement have value rather than just stating a fact (i.e. "Get your access pass to a wide database of casting calls & deals for performing artists").
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| Critical Problem on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | This text is completely unreadable. I thought it was some kind of lines/pattern until I looked closer.
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| 2 | This is also unreadable. I didn't even notice it until I was about to click submit on my review
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| Positive Feature on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | The logo is nice |
| New Idea on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | Eliminate this dashed rule and use a different color for one of the blocks of text to separate them instead.
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| 2 | I would recommend using a more active word to label the button though (i.e. "Sign Up" or "Get My Invite").
Also, a nice accent color might be nice here, like a vibrant green perhaps.
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| Other on Homepage V2 | |
| 1 | The photo is nice, but is there a reason it's so blurry?
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The layout as a whole is good. Very clean and simple and gets the message across. The square Submit button is quite awkward, and it throws off the balance of the overall window. Use the second version with the longer button. I think the box would look better with slightly rounded corners (maybe 4-8px) as well.
Thanks for the excellent feedback! I really appreciate the time you took to go through the various elements :-)
already done!