Concept Reviews
Minor Problem Too Many Fonts
It feels like there are too many fonts that are being used throughout the site. Five or six as far as I can tell. You'd probably be better served by using two, maybe three and varying the font-size.I don't believe these images integrate well with the design, you should change the border (to something more like on the first page) and lose the drop shadow. These are an interesting idea but they fill to scribbled. You should probably try to make them look like the illustration or the text below (the one where you describe yourself). Right now they feel to dirty and it might be better if your site would be perceived as having a dirty background whereas you yourself have awesome penmanship skills. Quotes are nice but are you quoting yourself? You should probably find a way to place jQuery on the same level as the others. Serious Problem Home?
You don't have a "home" button on your site. Make your name clickable with a link to it, it's pretty much expected behavior.-
1 2 commented:The "tagline" (hi, my name is..) is actually an H1, clickable and takes you home
Positive Feature This image has a border that's in tune with the whole design. I like this, it feels like "clean" dirty text but I think that message should be placed in a more obvious position. Here, it's the third or fourth thing that someone will see when visiting your website. Also, do you really need it on every page? -
1 2 commented:
The whole website is a one page that slides to different sections, and this right-hand side is actually fixed
New Idea Are these supposed to navigate through the portfolio using some sort of slider effect? If so, you might be better served making the whole portfolio feel like it's sliding to and from something. Summary:
It's a nice idea for a portfolio in the creative field but some elements seem out of place. With a little polish it could look great but right now it just feels a little too slapdash.
Because of the excessive graphics, the site seems to load a bit too slowly.
And as a last note / idea, if you're going to have text scrolling in and out of the page, you might not want it to scroll over your name ( at least not visibly).
Good Luck
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1 2 commented:
Thank you so much for your great review, I really appreciate it and will work more on my page considering your remarks :)
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Summary:
I suggest you make some yourself… your design is pretty average, and your illustrations aren't that good. BUT practice makes perfect, go give some real reviews on others and I'll re-review this, with something of use and help.
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1 2 commented:
First, I joined the website to get reviews not to give ones, and I definitely shouldnt be forced to give reviews to get ones! I'd give reviews when I feel like I want to, not just because thats the only way I would get reviews on mine!! that's plain stupid..thank you though for trashing my abilities, that definitely shows how unprofessional you are.. I'm sorry I asked for your review, its my fault not yours.. and its also my fault I joined this website, I should've known better.
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There are only 3 fonts on the website, 1 for the navigation and headers, 1 for body, and 1 only used for the "tagline" (hi, my name is..)