ZoomConcept Reviews
Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 loved it .. So smart, and obvious. Other on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 just add some other color, and try another font maybe a basic , sans serif would be better here! Summary:
I love what you have done here Amr,
it looks so professional to me, specially the "M" made from the skyscrapers.
just add some other color , and try another font maybe a basic , sans serif would be better here visit this link : http://www.dafont.com/
that's all , Good luck
Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 Love the M New Idea on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 Can you offer a dark color version of the logo so we can see what it would look like on a light background such as an envelop or letterhead. Other on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I might add just a little space here so that the Amr Mohsen is flush with the top of the M it looks like it might just be a pixel or two low. Summary:
I think this is a very nice design. The dimensions are great for working with on anything from emails & letterhead to a corp. website.
Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I love this font used! 2 Nice addition to the text, and it's clear what it is. Summary:
Very nice design! I'm finding it hard to say something bad about it aha. The image flows very well with the text and looking at either element individually makes it clear what the company is about.
Great work!
Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 beautiful, clever, appropriate, breathtaking Summary:
I am going to get yelled at for no giving a proper review. But this is hand down one of the best logos I have seen here on CF.
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Amr Mohsen commented:this is an honor on my chest :)
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Minor Problem on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 Maybe have the left side of this E align to the left side of the "h" above it. Also this E is slightly smaller than the "l" in the word "real" before it. 2 This "e" looks squished right into the "n" maybe open this up a nudge... 3 The bottom of the E seems to be a bit high in comparison to the "state" next to it. 4 the "se" seems to be lower than the "h" next to it. Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I like how you pushed the bottom of the "A" into the "m" it creates an interesting pull to the logo. 2 This typeface seems fitting for real estate. 3 Love the three blocks and the great use of negative space. 4 love the color. Other on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 Maybe consider making these corners align to the top of the smaller letters in "Amr Mohsen" to pull this logo solidly together. 2 This space seems a bit too open, maybe close it in a bit. Summary:
I really like this logo. Just a few suggestions to tighten it up a bit.
Minor Problem on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 the kerning is a bit off - effecting the readability of the M&R New Idea on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 make a bit larger to play up the negative space. Summary:
Amr,
Wonderfully executed... I would love to see in color.
Checkout these examples for inspiration
Nice start.
MichaelR
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Amr Mohsen commented:
yeah , well thank you for your review i need more information about balancing the logo and thanks for the inspiration i fav. this website , indeed soon am goin add the modified version of this logo
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Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I like the "M" shows an M and shows like apartment/tower blocks. Looks Creative 2 Nice background Summary:
Looks well thought of before designed. Ace in my opinion.
Positive Feature Simplicity
I like very clean and simple statements. And this does that.New Idea Color
Maybe a splash of color to the buildings would make the logo pop more.Tagline
I would prefer to see a tagline instead of "Real Estate." It's too broad. What do you really do within the field of Real Estate.Summary:
A clean and elegant logo. However, it could stand out more.
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Tpecnoc Kcabdeef commented:Hello amr, first I want to apologise for this unsolicited and unrelated message, you can ignore it.
But if you want to know, I’m posting this because the author of this review Charles Carlini did certain things to me and would do them to you or any member:• he insults and threatens of physical injuries people who review his concepts
• he breaks the law by doing the above
• he makes one line reviews just to get reviews on his own concepts (as you can see right here) and on this screenshot http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/931/charlescarliniconceptfe.jpg
• he uses members’ reviews for his own private communication as well as for off topic discussions
• he breaks the netiquette by doing all the abovehe started there http://www.conceptfeedback.com/concept-page/5767/website-redesign/ If you think what I did here was wrong then it means what he did there was wrong as well, and that’s what I wanted to demonstrate.
More on Charles Carlini:
websites: http://www.bolderdesigngroup.com/ http://carlinigroup.com/about-us.html http://intouchhome.com/ http://simplycharly.com/ http://www.linkedin.com/in/charlescarlini
social profiles: http://facebook.com/charles.carlini http://www.linkedin.com/in/charlescarlini http://twitter.com/#!/charlescarlini
email addresses: info@bolderdesigngroup.com charles@carlinigroup.com
telephone numbers: +44 20 7084 6330 • (800) 631-0413 • (212) 714-7722 • (212) 202-7579
physical address: 590 MADISON AVENUE, 21st FL NEW YORK, NY 10022
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Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 Love this high-rise image. Other Font treatment here seems off or unprofessional. Summary:
Wonderful image for commercial real estate. If you happen to focus on residential, I would change the image to reflect so. I love the font choice for your name, there is something I'm not sure about with the treatment of "Real Estate". Can't wait to see color, but love the background.
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Not much more to say about this one - I agree with everyone's points!
Minor Problem on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I'd try a different font for the name Positive Feature on real estate amr mohsen.png 1 I like the concept here Summary:
Looks clever. I assume it's 3 skyscrapers. And I'm also assuming all you focus on is commercial real estate. If that's true, you might want to add the word "Commercial" in there as well.
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hey, this logo is fine but need to do lot of improvements as this is not yet looking attractive so you could try some different color combination and i think logo should be self experimentary. if you need more suggestions then just mail me on prawin.shelar@gmail.com
Thanks, PraWIN
Minor Problem Balance
Your logo seems a bit unbalanced because a lot of things are happening in the right side of the design. Maybe you could try a version with the icon above or on the left.Positive Feature Good work
I think you've done a good job with this logo. It's clean, simple and minimalistic and it's easy to work with it at any scale.New Idea Switch font
I think that the icon would ask for a different font, maybe a sans-serif for which the M letter has straight lines instead of inclines. I would choose a font maybe similar to Avenir, ITC Avant Garde etc.Summary:
Overall I like you logo very much, especially the icon. As you can read from my comments, I would work a little bit more on the font. And also it would be nice to see it colored.
Positive Feature Nice and clean logo!!! New Idea Try to reduce font size for "Real Estate" Other Can you please submit a version of how will logo look on white background ? Summary:
If you're targeting residential you might want to change the logo.
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Amr Mohsen commented:
in which direction ?
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Tyler Byrd commented:It's interesting but after looking at the log again with Andy's comment in mind, I see the M but I also see 3 office towers side by side too. Is that would you meant Andy?
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Amr Mohsen commented:
he is pointing to the 3 skyscrapers i guess
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