| Minor Problem on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | Put the set inside the slide. |
| Serious Problem on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | A little weird, I thought that was the design for the menu, but it was not. |
| 2 | O plano de fundo está tomando toda minha atencao, talvez vc deva suavizar ele para que o conteudo seja a atencao do site. |
| Critical Problem | |
Home PageYour homepage, no need million of information, just need to catch the attention of the User. If you have a lot of information, the User will be lost and will not want to be wasting time looking for it. | |
| Critical Problem on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | The search box should be at the top of the page |
| 2 | I think this slider is taking all the attention of the page. |
| 3 | How many home page you have??
This pagination shall be only in the blog |
| Positive Feature on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | Only use it if your page is too big vertically, but the home page dont need to be, then take it off. |
In my opinion, the site will not fit, a lot of information, poor positioning. See my notes.
I didn't want to post a review before I understood everything correctly so forgive me Roberto for hooking up with your post ;)
David I don't understand - your goal is to get more clients and your target market are bloggers and designers? Are bloggers and designers your clients? Otherwise it makes no sense at all. Coult you clarify that?
it can be blog for designers, and blogging can be way to receive new clients. If they will be read your blog - they will be visited your portfolio. Maybe its bad definition, i am sorry my english is very poor.
| Serious Problem on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | the scale of the patterns is too large |
| 2 | consistency issue! you out the other headings with CAPS |
| New Idea on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | put them inside the slider area |
| 2 | change this font... looks oldish |
| 3 | Increase size and contrast you need focus on this area |
| 4 | Nice! I would try to use this in all headings |
Hi David,
I think the template has a nice start. Please see my comments.
Cip
| Minor Problem on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | I think you need to change the pattern |
| 2 | too much white space and the heading is too big. and a tags/category section. |
| Positive Feature on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | love the ribbon :) |
| New Idea on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | Adding some text about the post this image links too |
Its a pretty good concept just need some little adjustments
| Positive Feature on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | I like the tile-able background texture, fits the design well. |
| 2 | Good selection in navigation |
| New Idea on blog4.jpg | |
| 1 | Maybe a different colored ribbon to go with the color scheme |
Seems good, seeing from the themeforest icons, I hope it goes through the review process there! Good luck
Add more links which will make it easier for people to navigate through the website.
Oops, sorry for the Portuguese.
The background is taking all my attention, maybe you should soften it so that the content is the attention the site.