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| 1 | I like the shadow |
| New Idea on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | I think it might look nice if you align the line above folio with the upper border of that white image an the text "Since 2006..." |
| 2 | Headlines could be a little bit larger. |
| 3 | A very light fabric texture would look nice on that ribbon. |
| Minor Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Would not it be better to use the first letter in uppercase? |
| Minor Problem on screen1.jpg | |
| 1 | Why this space? A photo of yourself, your job? I do not think it necessary. |
| Serious Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Leave a little bigger. |
| Critical Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Not aligned with the menu. |
| Positive Feature on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | I liked the vertical menu and the way you used it, unique. |
| New Idea | |
BorderMaybe you can use a border on two topics, to differentiate them, seems poorly organized to me. | |
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| 1 | try using a serif font, I think it looks better for reading. |
Just some points to be worked out, the two versions, I think the second is better, less information, but higher quality. See my other notes.
Thank You Roberto. really appreciate your review.
| Minor Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | alignment is off |
| 2 | this would look better if left aligned |
| 3 | not aligned with navigation text |
| 4 | grammar issues |
| 5 | grammar: this should read, "When I realized what I was born to do, I became an ...." |
| 6 | this sentence is just floating over here under the bulleted list. |
Hello Penn - Overall this is pretty solid concept. When browsing the site, I did notice alignment and border radius issues though. I wish you would have posted screenshots of all the pages so I could point them out better.
navigation pages: the main content should line up with the top horizontal line used for the navigation.
testimonials page: the border radius on the video doesn't match the rounded corners of testimonial boxes with the quotes.
contact page: why not use social media icons rather than plain text for Twitter & Linked In?
Footer: where is it?
Please see my notes...
Rebecca, Thank you so much for the very detail review. Really appreciate reviewing other pages.
The reason i didn't align it to the menu is because I feel it needs to be consistent with my folio page. the page in my folio is bit raised with the menu, so I just followed that alignment for the other pages.
Thanks for noticing the testimonial page, will fix the radius.
In the contact, I just used plain text for the social media to have a smooth flow. But will try to play around again with icons.
Footer.. hehe... yeah still not done adding it.
Thank You so much!
:-)
| Minor Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | I think it would look better if this text was justified, instead of left aligned as it looks sort of rough at the moment |
| 2 | Change the wording here, doesn't make sense |
| Serious Problem on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Footer? |
| Positive Feature on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Really like the logo! |
| New Idea on screen2.jpg | |
| 1 | Would be nice to have a good looking texture on the ribbon to give it a bit more appeal. |
Overall I think it's a very nice design. It flows nicely a long the page and the user doesn't have to do anything to see the content they want.
I've pointed out a few problems in the notes but I think all of them can be sorted very quickly. I think a nice footer at the bottom with some contact details would go a long way, instead of making the user download your CV or click on the contact page, they can see straight away how to get in touch.
Sort out a few alignment problems and I think this will be a very solid design! Great work!
Daniel, Thank you for your detailed review. Yes, your suggestion is great for the footers as well as your other notes. I'll try to implement your ideas. Thanks!
Good luck! I look forward to seeing the final design.
Really nicely done , with some nice js it will look great
I like this design very much. Decent combination of colors is nice. I have one question. What font is used in logo and menu?
I dont have very much to critize on it, only one thing. Allign "who am i" with "folio".
Good luck.
thanks for the review. i'm using neosans.