ZoomConcept Reviews
Positive Feature on screen2.jpg 1 I like the shadow New Idea on screen2.jpg 1 I think it might look nice if you align the line above folio with the upper border of that white image an the text "Since 2006..." 2 Headlines could be a little bit larger. 3 A very light fabric texture would look nice on that ribbon. Minor Problem on screen2.jpg 1 Would not it be better to use the first letter in uppercase? Minor Problem on screen1.jpg 1 Why this space? A photo of yourself, your job? I do not think it necessary. Serious Problem on screen2.jpg 1 Leave a little bigger. Critical Problem on screen2.jpg 1 Not aligned with the menu. Positive Feature on screen2.jpg 1 I liked the vertical menu and the way you used it, unique. New Idea Border
Maybe you can use a border on two topics, to differentiate them, seems poorly organized to me.New Idea on screen2.jpg 1 try using a serif font, I think it looks better for reading. Summary:
Just some points to be worked out, the two versions, I think the second is better, less information, but higher quality. See my other notes.
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Penn Folio commented:Thank You Roberto. really appreciate your review.
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Minor Problem on screen2.jpg 1 alignment is off 2 this would look better if left aligned 3 not aligned with navigation text 4 grammar issues 5 grammar: this should read, "When I realized what I was born to do, I became an ...." 6 this sentence is just floating over here under the bulleted list. Summary:
Hello Penn - Overall this is pretty solid concept. When browsing the site, I did notice alignment and border radius issues though. I wish you would have posted screenshots of all the pages so I could point them out better.
navigation pages: the main content should line up with the top horizontal line used for the navigation.
testimonials page: the border radius on the video doesn't match the rounded corners of testimonial boxes with the quotes.
contact page: why not use social media icons rather than plain text for Twitter & Linked In?
Footer: where is it?
Please see my notes...
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Penn Folio commented:
Rebecca, Thank you so much for the very detail review. Really appreciate reviewing other pages.
The reason i didn't align it to the menu is because I feel it needs to be consistent with my folio page. the page in my folio is bit raised with the menu, so I just followed that alignment for the other pages.
Thanks for noticing the testimonial page, will fix the radius.
In the contact, I just used plain text for the social media to have a smooth flow. But will try to play around again with icons.
Footer.. hehe... yeah still not done adding it.
Thank You so much!
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Rebecca Perry commented::-)
Minor Problem on screen2.jpg 1 I think it would look better if this text was justified, instead of left aligned as it looks sort of rough at the moment 2 Change the wording here, doesn't make sense Serious Problem on screen2.jpg 1 Footer? Positive Feature on screen2.jpg 1 Really like the logo! New Idea on screen2.jpg 1 Would be nice to have a good looking texture on the ribbon to give it a bit more appeal. Summary:
Overall I think it's a very nice design. It flows nicely a long the page and the user doesn't have to do anything to see the content they want.
I've pointed out a few problems in the notes but I think all of them can be sorted very quickly. I think a nice footer at the bottom with some contact details would go a long way, instead of making the user download your CV or click on the contact page, they can see straight away how to get in touch.
Sort out a few alignment problems and I think this will be a very solid design! Great work!
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Penn Folio commented:
Daniel, Thank you for your detailed review. Yes, your suggestion is great for the footers as well as your other notes. I'll try to implement your ideas. Thanks!
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Daniel Morrison commented:Good luck! I look forward to seeing the final design.
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Really nicely done , with some nice js it will look great
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I like this design very much. Decent combination of colors is nice. I have one question. What font is used in logo and menu?
I dont have very much to critize on it, only one thing. Allign "who am i" with "folio".
Good luck.
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Penn Folio commented:
thanks for the review. i'm using neosans.
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