Never before have I seen such a master piece!
When thine eyes first spied this work of art. I pooped a little.
your use of color really pops, and your attention to detail is astonishing!
I really like how you brought in a nice laid back font, and brought a nice gamers flare to your name.
I really would like to see this more "web 2.0" however. Your going far as a designer and a businessman.
Thanks Luke, what do you about adding saturated cyan and yellow spots?
Fo sho. and I think its lacking on neon green. you might wanna put a dash of that in there.
| Serious Problem on Untitled-1.png | |
| 1 | Too much contrast between the colors. The text and background have to always be very close to each other so that there it creates mystery |
| Critical Problem on Untitled-1.png | |
| 1 | Needs more gradients |
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| 1 | Beautiful typeface |
i don't think it's that good. it has a couple good elements but overall it lacks more color and gradients. You are only using one typeface a logo has to at least have 5 different typefaces to be effective enough
april fools, Daniel ;)
;)
LOL... that takes care of my ab workout today.
Then you can get a flatscreen and hang it on your wall towards to you favourite coach, by the end of the year you will get that perfect six pack.
Yeah man, its luxury, good work :-))) like a 1st april joke its pretty.
EVERYBODY knows if you truly want to confuse your audience you have to print it upside down!!
here I just spent 2 hour making a mock-up for you...I hope you learn something!
Sheeezz!!!
You are tha man Alex!!! That look awesome.
You are getting 5 extra gratuitous points for agreeing with me PLUS a bonus tip:
if you leave the front blank, you can print it on the BACK!!! wow!
JA JA jA just kidding..dont do that you will loose sooo much business..that is just crazy
I feel like someone does this every year. I'm glad to see the tradition has continued. Instead of plain comic sans, I see you've added the italics. This therefore deserves a five star
Thanks tiff! I remember last year one. Yellow background and red text (RGBof course). Thought the italics were add a lil more ;), though Alex's mock is perfect I think.
That was awful english!... have to think a little more before telling my fingers to type.
Well there is simply nothing negative for me to comment on.
A triumph for modern day graphic design.
What can I say... I just have a good eye ;)
You trully are talented
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| 1 | Your stunning use of comic sans is impeccable, the contrast between colours is just right! |
| 2 | This is green |
| 3 | Also green. |
| 4 | Green. |
| 5 | BLUE! Oh, wait...green. |
| 6 | Using numbers really appeals to the hip crowd of today. Easy now rudeboy, big man job. |
This is by far and away the biggest, baddest business card around. You'll be exploding heads before you even whip out the full card. One glimpse of any of that green/pink combo...I dread to think.
Awesome design for the start of a new mo---- wait... April Fool's? I didn't even realise!
:)
Thanks Aaran! Knew you would love it... ;)