ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 how about you center this? 2 I don't see the fading dots anywhere else... how about just a line? Serious Problem on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 This doesn't belong with the other elements. How about you put a fading horizontal line? 2 the drop shadows make it looks smudgy. how about going for a green gradient similar to the other buttons. 3 I think there's no need for this. or you can make it subtle gray or green. 4 Since it's empty below, I think you can put FAQs here or list of Highly Searched Items. 5 The underline is making it dirty... 6 try removing the underline. It's already understood as a link. 7 align it to the right 8 This is to harsh... I think it needs to be subtle a bit. Positive Feature on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 love the buttons 2 like the fades. New Idea on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 just a suggestion, try playing with scripts or italic version of that serif. 2 I think this needs to standout a bit Summary:
The design is total zen. I like how the elements and colors created a very peaceful warm design. I think you really had captured the right mood for the website.
In my views there are some elements that needs to be improve, just see my notes and I hope those can improve your design.
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Minor Problem on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 Alignment issues - I realize you've aligned to the vertical centre of each block of body copy but this just feels messy to me. Each space below each subhead should be visually equal but they're all different because your top lines aren't aligning. In an ideal world the copy would all be roughly equal but ragged bottoms look better than ragged tops 2 Again alignment of Find It and the copy below isn't horizontally aligned to the other two columns to the left Minor Problem on Header zoom 1 Would it not be possible to include this strapline as part of the logo more rather than have these elements feeling very separate in the header? Minor Problem on Body Zoom 1 I love how the little girl has eye contact with the practitioner and how relaxed she obviously is but I think the first image should show an adult having treatment rather than a child as it's easier for an adult to then be able to see themselves having treatment. If the majority of their patients are children and that is their specialism then sure go ahead with a child as the opening image. -
Andrew Sepic commented:She does specialize with children and pre-natal work. Also she didn't have any good photos of adults being treated!
New Idea on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 Huge amount of vertical space given to the logo - am not sure about it all centred in the top here. For people on lower resolution monitors it's going to push the main content further down the page with a large empty area at the top. I'm normally a lover of white space but this feels unbalanced when taken in context visually with the rest of the page -
Andrew Sepic commented:
I totally see your point. It looks a bit like a pyramid when looking at the visual weight of the entire page. Although I find it a bit refreshing.
Summary:
Hi there Andrew,
This looks so much better than the current site. Overall I think you've hit a great tone and feel - there are just a few issues with alignment to fix and the only biggie I can see is the balance of the header/banner to the rest of the page. It seems to have a huge amount of vertical white space and feels unbalanced in context to the rest of the page. Also the two elements of the strapline and the logo feel very separate and not linked visually.
I've put a few notes on the image for a few of my other thoughts on it.
I hope this helps a bit.
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Andrew Sepic commented:
Emma, your comments have been super helpful and show a depth of design know-how which really makes me glad for finding this community! Good food for thought and going forward with the design I'll keep these points in mind.
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Emma Simpson commented:Really glad you found my input of help :)
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Minor Problem on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 try do better navigation, maybe will be good add any gradient into it. It have same color like background and i am really dont like it. -
Andrew Sepic commented:
This has come up a few times and I agree! I'll work to make this more prominent. Thanks!
Positive Feature on SH_weddraft2.jpg 1 I like this, it looks nice Summary:
Overally it looks nice, maybe little bland but nice.
Good luck and keep up good work.
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Summary:
If you can then try to add the 4 sections below the banner into separate defined boxes. This will surely add life to your site and will make them more defined.
Penn, Thanks a lot for your review. Overall I got a lot out of all the little details you've brought up. Much Appreciated!