ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on home.jpg 1 What's this for? Is it only available in Spanish and Italian? Why not English? 2 I would give the current and hover state a bit more breathing room 3 Why is this shadow here? 4 Nice shadow, but the treatment needs a bit more softening and transparency 5 Don't like the inner shadow on theses, in fact these quote marks can be done in css, and would look better about a 20% shade 6 again shadow is too dark 7 Center align, and make grey unless rolled over 8 Watch your alignment 9 Alignment issues 10 All these boxes, they don't all need inner shadow and if you are going to do it, make it less blunt... use a dark red / magenta as the shadow and make it 45% with a 2px radius Serious Problem on dettaglio.jpg 1 Look at this page - and tell me what's wrong with it? 2 What do you reckon might be wrong here? 3 and here? 4 and here? Serious Problem on galleries.jpg 1 shadow treatment - see previous notes 2 Same light source on the page - but no shadow - keep it consistent! Critical Problem on home.jpg 1 Seems to be no grid Summary:
Bianca
So far so good... It's a huge improvement from what they have so great job already!
There's a few things that stick out so I'll add notes...
Ok I think I have been picky enough. Overall, it is a vast improvement however there are things that really need to fixed / tweaked to make it look fantastico!
Good Luck
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Bianca Allara commented:Thanks: is the kind of support I was looking for.
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Serious Problem on home.jpg 1 Allingment 2 A think it will be better look, if all images will have same size New Idea on home.jpg 1 Try any button. Summary:
It has good start and idea but need more edits.
Good luck to your design, and all others.
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Bianca Allara commented:
Scores still seem a little high ... I am so strict?
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David Babinec commented:I think its not bad, but it is a bit outdated.
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Minor Problem on home.jpg 1 I would add a thin vertical line to separate the content on the page. Serious Problem on home.jpg 1 These colors are not a clear indication of the language. 2 There is no call to action. What are the users supposed to do? Serious Problem on dettaglio.jpg 1 Is that a link? Be careful not to confuse users. You are using this color for other elements. All links should have the same color and that color should be specific to the links. Critical Problem on home.jpg 1 Are the users supposed to click on these pictures to add them to the cart? If so, let them know. 2 Typo Critical Problem on dettaglio.jpg 1 Not consistent with other pages. You should have a button. See links below for more info about search buttons usability. http://webusability-blog.com/search-type-in-field-button/ http://www.useit.com/alertbox/20050509.html Critical Problem on galleries.jpg 1 The top pictures are the same as the Art Shop page which may confuse users. 2 This should be in English. -
Bianca Allara commented:
I agree on everything, but if I had written "Lorem ipsum" would be in English?!
Other on home.jpg 1 Remove ‘navigation’ on the footer. -
Bianca Allara commented:
I can't
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Maite Picado commented:Bianca what I meant is remove the word "Navigation" not the navigation itself.
Other on dettaglio.jpg 1 What are these thumbnails for? Other on visore.jpg 1 This corner hurts! I would move these icons slightly to the left. Summary:
Overall your site looks good but there is still room for improvement. You need to tell the users up front what you expect them to do and guide them through the site.
From a design perspective, you need to fix the alignment of various elements, and indicate clearly where your links are. I would try a different treatment for the pictures to have them pop out more, maybe use a color to frame them.
Keep working at it, you are getting close!
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Noooooo!Is the only original part of the whole project! The three quotes after Spanish and Italian are the colors of the British flag, when you do a: hover appear the quotes. If you upload the page in the English the page is like the layout and the texts are in English, if you move the mouse over the image becomes the writing language.
I thought it was an original idea!