ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on landing.jpg 1 I would bring the titles closer to the paragraph it belongs to. Right here is a great example as how this line feels it could belong to the paragraph above it or to the one below it. (since the distance is the same.) 2 Try not to end your paragraphs with just one word... add words, take them away or adjust line length to compensate. 3 kinda a dull color, maybe try some deeper colors that contrast with the book color and in turn it will bring out both the title and the book. 4 This little section feels un-aligned, maybe center the line under the sticker and make it in smaller print. 5 I would left align this title and such considering the rest of the copy is also left aligned. Other on landing.jpg 1 By making your dollar signs smaller you will draw less attention to the fact it costs. 2 I would track and kern these paragraphs. There is a lot of space between the period and the next word. Summary:
Overall, I think this could polish up a bit via color and proximity attention.
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Serious Problem on landing.jpg 1 I'd put this along with the picture of your book at the top (above the 'fold') Critical Problem on landing.jpg 1 Sentence dissapears New Idea on landing.jpg 1 Can you show this through an Analytics graph? Summary:
This webpage should make me want to read your eBook but its just too wordy. Needs some pictures in it to break it up, help those people who are scan reading! Picture paints a thousand words and all that. Is there not a killer graph or something in the eBook that really promotes the level of detail you go into? Might also be worth showing table of contents to give me a great insight into the things you cover
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Don't think I'm being lazy here by not giving you lots of feedback, but I think you already have what is most important - the messaging/content.
Your subtitles and bullet point style work well, and you don't have to add all these icons, images, etc...it wouldn't fit with the audience I think you are trying to reach.
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Not my kind of stuff. There's practically no design to it. Apart from the buttons. Which are ok. I personally hate such email or landing page. But hey, this is probably the few times where simplicity works. And that's it. It does what it's suppose to do. Load with info and sell and sell and sell... hardsell. But no innovation here if you ask me.
Minor Problem The book cover is dull
You don't see any 'real' books that have a cover like this. Maybe spend some time on Amazon and see about new more modern styling for the book mockup?Critical Problem looks like every other 1 page advert site
It looks like every other 1 page advert site you see on the internet. Not sure about you but it's the type of site I just click away from as it offers nothing and does not convey trust.New Idea offer something extra
These type of sites work but trying to convince the view how MUCH they get for just the $19... maybe offer 2 of 3 other 'quick guide' ebooks FREE when you get this one. They don't meed to be big e-books but just giving a few 'freebies' helps with this type of sale.Summary:
First impressions from someone who thinks that blogging is for people with too much time on their hands..
Design is functional. The asthetics remind me of self-help books (that no one trusts).
There is a hell of a lot of text! Can you cut it down to say 100 words? As Winston Churchill said to his wife "if I had had longer I would have written you a shorter letter".
Why is there two 'add to cart' buttons? Are you selling two books?
Hope this helps
Summary:
Isn't there some sort of statistics that say people ignore 90% of what's on the screen when browsing the web?
I for one started to scroll, then ignored everything after a while ..
Maybe you should try and shorten it up, get to the point a bit quicker?
Thanks Amy. You review was extremely helpful, appreciate you taking the time.