ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Headings
It's fine to bold the 1st word in the headings, but keep the rest of the text in the heading the same font size. There's a little too much unnecessary emphasis on the 1st words right now.Heading icons
I'm not sure that the heading icons are working. They are lost being at the end of the heading and in the same color as the rest of the text. I don't think they hurt the design, but they aren't really adding anything either.Call to action underline
What's with the first letter underline in the call to action labels? It's unnecessary and distracting. Lose this feature!Positive Feature Colors
Yellow and black are strong, contrasting colors that look good next to each other.Grid
The layout looks good on the 3 column grid. There may even bee a little too much padding between each column.Pattern in Yellow
Nice, subtle pattern in the yellow.New Idea Yellow Background
The yellow background is very strong and it looks extremely odd that it abruptly stops at the bottom of the main image and then starts again toward the bottom. Instead, fade the yellow background to white to maintain the color and pattern, and to soften the edge. You could reverse it for the bottom, but I don't think it's needed at all there. Just the black is sufficient in the footer.Slider Controls
You have 2 different styles for the slider controls (main image and testimonial). Use 1 consistent design.Summary:
The overall layout is working well and the color scheme is a nice choice. There are just a few small observations to consider making to improve the overall appearance. Good luck!
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New Idea Social Icons
I think adding some social icons in footer or somewhere else will be great.Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 Be careful not to make an "oreo" effect, where all content is 'stuck' between two walls... make sure to distinguish the header from the footer, perhaps with the use of similar but lighter hues of yellow and black. Positive Feature Colors
The use of colors is great! Yellow and black are very strong colors, but their use here is very good. You might want to try fading the yellow block to white, instead of just cutting it off, just to see if it lightens a bit more.Other on homepage.jpg 1 I would like to see how a continuous shadow would look... Summary:
I like your design very much; it's bold, yet somehow it does not torture my eyes. Very good use of colors and patterns. Be careful with the "oreo" effect, don't crush your content between two walls. Overall, very good design.
Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 it doesn't feel right... Critical Problem on homepage.jpg 1 This ruins the overall design..The icon is bit too much here, you already have some images above. New Idea on homepage.jpg 1 how about some subtle gray gradients here... so it would too look too much white/empty 2 Try something else here. The quotation mark doesn't really look good there. try other type of quotation marks Summary:
Overall it's nice, Its clean and has good colors. Though some minor corrections would help... I would also like to see it's inner page to see it's consistency.
Serious Problem on homepage.jpg 1 this light is too strong, try to reduce it, and same for the header Critical Problem on homepage.jpg 1 you have to change the background Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 The yellow from the buttons distracts my attention from the content. 2 Footer is too simple and the blurred white line doesn't look good. Serious Problem on homepage.jpg 1 The design looks like it was cut in two. The white is to strong here. Consider adding a gradient .. or make the whole background in yellow. Summary:
Hello David,
I like your design, the colors used are very nice.
If I may put my two cents in, this is what I don't like ...
Thank you for your review! I try make on your notes.