| Serious Problem on 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Too red unless your book cover will have a texture. |
| Positive Feature on 4.jpg | |
| 1 | I really like the red constant color with the fading white in the back. This is very well placed, and let you play to bring the butterfly idea inside the cover. |
| Positive Feature on Original.jpg | |
| 1 | This colors lead me to think of butterfly wings. |
| New Idea on 4.jpg | |
| 1 | I think you should consider one of two things:
1. Bring more smooth butterfly like this, or
2. have some colors on the butterfly |
From the concept text I am unable to decipher which is cover 1, 4 or the original. So I will give my opinion base on all three of them and you will have to choose which is better.
In general I think all covers are ok. In all you are able to add a more pictorial definition of a butterfly.
I will say that the cover in gold brings more th idea of colors of butterfly way better than the other two, but the red constant in the other two covers shows the book as more interesting and engaging.
Please check my comments inside each comment and I hope you find them useful.
Thanks, Geo
Wish you good luck with your book.
Hi Iruna
Your cover is pretty good, the colours work well and it definitely stands out. It's a good cover in itself.
However, as for replacing the original, I'm not so sure. The original is more traditional, and not so modern, but that watercolour on the cover is frankly beautiful and I'm not sure it deserves to be replaced.
STILL - good effort from you :)
Thanks a lot, Micheal :D
I've just designed a new book cover for "Goodbye Madame Butterfly" . Please give me your opinion :D Thanks a lot.
I've just designed a new book cover for "Goodbye Madame Butterfly" . Please give me your opinion :D Thanks a lot.
I prefer the watercolour on the beige coloured cover but I quite like the type on the red cover.
Overall I think I would like to see the beige cover with more minimal typography.
I've just designed a new book cover for "Goodbye Madame Butterfly" . Please give me your opinion :D Thanks a lot.
I've just designed a new book cover for "Goodbye Madame Butterfly" . Please give me your opinion :D Thanks a lot.