And again. Your theme is again nice! You've got a very distinctive style, that looks good. I like clean adn modern themes like this. I am doing similiar themes like you, and your style is really good. Are you selling this themes on theme forest?
| Minor Problem on revolve-blog-page.jpg | |
| 1 | Add paragraphs here, especially if this is a screenshot for a template site
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| 2 | Use icons a few pixels smaller |
| 3 | Too big! |
| Serious Problem on revolve-blog-categories.jpg | |
| 1 | There is alot of wasted space here and makes the design feel unbalanced
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| 1 | This is a little harsh compared to the aesthetics of the rest of the design. Try something a bit more subtle. |
There's a whole lot thats inherently bad about this design, but it just doesn't "pop" out at me. I'm assuming you're designing this as a template for a theme website like ThemeForest.
The typography needs a touch up, the font you used is a little too sharp for my taste.
If you make any revisions, I'd love to see them!
-Simon
| Minor Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | Reduce the size of this button, too big for an indication that there is some more content. May be try out putting this link or button in purple color.
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| 2 | Is this icon really needed.
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| Serious Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | A box for icon? May be it is eating up too much of premium space out there...consider some alternative.
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| 1 | Why so big for subscribing through RSS. This place can be utilized for some other important notification or ad or any such stuff than RSS
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| 1 | Loved the color gradient of footer, purple with white highlight. Awesome! |
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| 1 | This co0ntent area is nicely designed and well utilized with clearly displaying the content. Maybe read more can go in purple color, don no, try out! |
Hi Cip
Indeed a great design of a wordpress theme.
I liked its color scheme. The purple in the header and footer gives a depth to the design and overall grey n white combination provides the sophistication needed to any excellent theme.
Though some suggestions and observations are listed in the notes.
All the best and keep up the great design work.
cheers
Prasahnt
Thanks Prasahnt,
Feel free to share your wisdom on my other concepts that I will post .
Cip
Sure Cip, thank you for your kind invitation. Will be looking forward for your concepts!
Must say that you have got really good taste of designing, I liked your concepts(themes)! And would be glad to review them as soon as they are up!
cheers!!
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Too much grayThis excessive use of beveled gray is making the page look dull and kind of "big" | |
Text should start vertically at same level as iconsIt's basic design rule | |
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It's like thousands other themesEssentially everything is the same. Horizontal navigation, slider, call to action, 3 columns, 4 columns, seperate footer. Absolutely no differentiator | |
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gradientsI would make your gray to white gradients way more subtile, make the white just a touch lighter than the gray. This goes for the header and Subscribe RSS one. | |
| Minor Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | It's kinda dull compare to the other elements |
| 2 | im not really sure about the menu, it doesn't look right. try using a a glass effect |
| Minor Problem on revolve-blog-categories.jpg | |
| 1 | fill this up with paragraph or reduce the space |
| Minor Problem on revolve-blog-page.jpg | |
| 1 | it's too crowded. put some paragraph and space in it. |
| Serious Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | make it smaller, It destroys the whole elegance of the site. it's like a big mole. |
| Positive Feature on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | I really like this parts. I really admire the subtle gradient. very elegant |
| New Idea on revolve-blog-categories.jpg | |
| 1 | put something here, like a description of the page |
| New Idea on revolve-blog-page.jpg | |
| 1 | try adding some text styling. eg how the H1,H2,H3 would look like also how quoted text would look. |
It's a great design, I really like the contrast of purple and grays and white. It's really clean. there are some parts of the site that needs some polishing though.
Nice clean layout. Like it a lot.
Would darken up the "light gray font" on the white background. Dress up your "call to action" buttons - they blend in too much and I'm not knowing what you want me to do next. Should be an easy, distinct path for "Next Steps" you want visitors to take.
| Minor Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | Perhaps a smaller RSS logo. It seems to be overpowering the logo at the top. |
| Positive Feature on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | Nice use of gradients. |
| Positive Feature on revolve-blog-page.jpg | |
| 1 | Clean design and feel. |
| New Idea on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | Perhaps a dimmer ligh? The contrast between the dark and light areas seems a bit drastic. |
I enjoy this layout design. Use of light is alluring. Please see Notes.
Very good design, excellent colors, very elegant. One thing though, I would change the logo (if it's not the company's), since the font I think is too informal for the design. Love the footer, excellent use of gradients and shadows. Keep it up. :)
| Minor Problem on revolve-blog-page.jpg | |
| 1 | Feels very empty here. This is a larger header bar with a lot of empty space. |
| Serious Problem on revolve-homepage.jpg | |
| 1 | I would highlight the RSS feed more. Bring it up top and give it some color to pop. |
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Great designI love the Apple feel of the design. Very clean and the information is in nice small bits, easy to scan and consume. | |
Overall, love the design. Just some minor tweaks needed here and there.
Not yet . Thanks for the feedback David!