ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Header design
The header design is a little plain and could be enhanced a bit. I'd consider adding the company tagline below the logo and increase the size of the font in the navigation. You may also want to design some nice buttons to hold each link.Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 Consider a photo that's not so bright. The tagline is a little hard to read. 2 These look a little like buttons. You may want to consider removing the box and just left aligning the headings. 3 This isn't really intuitive. Not sure what this means. Positive Feature Layout
The layout is very well done. Everything is aligned properly, which makes the it look organized and clean.Image Use
Great use of images throughout the site. It's attractive from the top down.Footer
The footer also has ample space for relevant information. This will work well for users.New Idea on homepage.jpg 1 Trim some of the extra space above the logo. 2 I'd add some color to these buttons to make them stand out more. Summary:
Great work on the layout. There are just a few minor tweaks to consider before you consider this final!
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David Babinec commented:thank you for review!
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Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 Get rid of the arrow tails and just leave the head. 2 Some more padding betwen the title and description wouldn't hurt. Serious Problem on homepage.jpg 1 All columns should be equally wide. This one isn't wide enough and creates unnecessary attention making it look out of place. 2 You can create an illusion of full width links by simply adding bottom border lines on each link that ran the full width. Positive Feature on homepage.jpg 1 Region from header to slideshow works well. Summary:
Hey you got a nice start there but it still looks like you need some final polish.
check my notes.
cheers.
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David Babinec commented:
Ok I try do it better. Thanks for review!
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Minor Problem Background or buttons/headers
The only problem I have with this design is the gray. Too much gray! You should change the background to white so the gray buttons and headers stand out more... or use a different color on the headers/buttons to make those stand out. Maybe another darker gray, like the buttons on this website.Arrows
I think these arrows are too big. Should try something smaller and more elegant.Positive Feature Nice layout and structure
You have done an excellent job organizing and structuring the content of this website. Great job!Summary:
Hello! It is hard to criticize such wonderful layout. I'm in love with the structure and organization on this one. The only problem I have with the design is the color combo. GRAY is so sad and dull!
Keep up the good work!
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David Babinec commented:
ey man! thank you for review, im really happy you like it!
Btw. its not gray, it is light blue, and bg is white with a few visible wood pattern, what looks like grey. But I try do it better with colors.
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Joel Acevedo commented:First of all, thanks for the award. Regarding if it is gray or blue, the issue is the same... you need more contrast. :)
Keep up with the great job!
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David Babinec commented:
I'm surprised you said this because I am an absolute amateur. I am started with photoshop about 2 months ago. So thank you!
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Summary:
I love how clean it is. Very nice visual structure, you clearly stayed very true to your grid system. Very nice. The only thing I don't really like is the contact form. I think that could use a little work. The gradients in my opinion are a little harsh for them.
Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 You could reduce the padding a little top and bottom of the testimonial panel. New Idea on homepage.jpg 1 Suggest you offer the template in a range of colour palettes. This light background is pleasant, but not for everyone. 2 This area could be great for a video panel. The bottom pic is an awkward shape for general use – make it proportionally deeper. Summary:
I was just about to give you a rave review until I read Michael's comments and looked at your profile. On the one hand, you're clearly a talented designer with a good grasp of what it takes to capture attention with your template.
On the other (and this is no more than general business advice) you've got to put in first before you earn the right to take out.
Anyway, this a truly excellent piece of work and I hope you do well with it. I have a client who would buy it immediately. It's exactly what I've been looking for!
Hope this helps.
Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 more spacing for the top and bottom of this part 2 uneven spacing between top and bottom of this horizontal rule 3 This does not look good. Pattern this to look a bit like the social links on the right. Serious Problem on homepage.jpg 1 add more line-height, for now the text are all grouped together and a bit hard to read Summary:
A clean layout, I quite like it. The only problem I have with this are mostly with padding and line spacing.
Other than that, great work.
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David Babinec commented:
thank you for review.
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Minor Problem on homepage.jpg 1 To big arrow. Smaller withoout shadow would be great. 2 To much contrast between blue and black color text. 3 Tu much space...but I think background is QL. 4 1px smaller fonts? Serious Problem on homepage.jpg 1 I don't know if this pictures works together. Try with something different...looks like you are selling cactus:) Summary:
It's good start...but try to level-up some details. Goog work.
Positive Feature on homepage.jpg 1 Rich color - nice treatment. All this lacks is a call to action button 2 Smart... 3 Well designed 4 Nice use of space for testimonials Summary:
Simply put - this design is solid and exciting... Congrats.
Summary:
It's disappointing that yet again somebody has just spammed the site with empty reviews to get feedback.
Should be ashamed of yourself, clearly a truly selfish individual.
Just unfortunate that the other good people of this site gave you feedback having obviously not recognized your exploitation.
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David Babinec commented:
sorry, but i dont speak english very good, and so I cant write big reviews, yout know?! i´m sorry but i need that reviews for posting my concept, but rating what i give you is real.your site is booring, but i cant write more comments for my bad english
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Michael Gunner commented:There are plenty of examples of you typing out more than enough English to be able to review peoples work properly. You don't have to write paragraphs even, you can comment work with simple quick annotations.
You didn't write one word about my site, you didn't even bother to change the default title of the review.
You're just a selfish person and your language excuse is laughable. It's just a massive shame the good, decent people of CF gave you their time and in return you gave them nothing.
Shame on you.
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eh:-D...my english is so poor;)