ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 Align Left 2 Don't double up lines here Minor Problem on 02_aboutus.jpg 1 Lower this column to the "If you have" tagline 2 Too much white space between title and paragraph. Break this up into two sentence paragraphs. Easier for visitors to read. 3 Choose more appropriate image. I can't see how this relates to the site. Serious Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 Why put what you do so low? It would improve your sites functionality to make the 3 image sections above it represent it, and make that a feed area of some sort 2 Gradient Positive Feature on 01_homepage.jpg 1 That's cool Summary:
Mushi Mushi David(my new thing for saying hello for a while),
I agree with previous reviews that you have a good start for your template design. Here is what I like:
- The header in the first image is quite eye catching. It quickly gives visitors something to focus on.
- Your Color Scheme. Its nothing original, but it is a solid choice that you would be hard pressed to go against.
Now here is where I think some improvements can be made:
- Each site draft have nice elements, but each is lacking what the other has.
Your color scheme. Playing with it a bit would help your template stand out. Right now it is very similar to others out.
Gradients for those buttons instead of solid color. A solid color background does not help it stand out enough. A subtle background gradient will add CTA to the buttons, and help them stand out of the site.
Well, that is all I have to say. Hope it helps improve your design. ^_^
Minor Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 The text isn't aligned with your 3 columns. Adjust these to fit with the rest of the styles, including left-aligning the text on the right. Serious Problem Logo and Tagline
The logo and tagline are completely lost in the dark header. The light gray container is the main focal point so users will skip right to the navigation, but have no idea what site they're on or what it's for. Bring the gray header to the top to pull the logo and rest of the content together. Increase the size of the text for the tagline.Images
The images are all too large. Sure, they're nice, but unnecessary. Trim the main image height by about 1/3. For the 3 smaller images, cut the height in half and add headings over each one. Under the photos, add a few lines of text to draw the user more.Positive Feature Service Icons
The services icons look good. They are a good size and don't saturate the area.New Idea Order of text
Depending on what the headings and purpose of the 3 smaller images are, you may want to move the about text up to explain a little more about the company before you display the specific services.New Idea on 01_homepage.jpg 1 If people are going to follow the site, they need to learn about the company first. So, following that order, move the social network icons to the footer and add a heading over them to explain what the user will get by following them. Summary:
The site colors aren't bad and it's well padded, but the images are way too large and there isn't enough information on the site to keep users interested and clicking. Consider my points and let me know if you have any questions.
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Rebecca Perry commented:nice review...
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Serious Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 too big. 2 too close. Not aligned 3 bad alignment Summary:
if you want to sell your themes on TF, browse the TF and look at examples. compare yourself. all i can say is you should work hard to design acceptable theme. good luck
Minor Problem A clean design
Nice Clean and minimal design style, with nice color pallet.The 3 images are too big
if you can see the 4 images of your site are too big for and take a large area of your index landscape Also its not a good idea to put the slider indicator inside the text area of the slogan. Put it somewhere alse in the right corner of the main image maybe its a good idea. Also change the main image. It dosen't communicate the massage "we have big ideas and big potencials"Serious Problem the main menu is too discrete
Make the main menu item bigger or bolder you have to give o more focus over this area. Also maybe its a good idea the icons on the left to make them a little smaller. Ok the social media is the new hype but the icon have a more stronger presence than the main menu.Critical Problem The main text is way down
Better move the text between the main image area and the 3 image column so you will make a better balance for your page. Also maybe you can remove the last image and put there the services column instead.New Idea Make the main image area smaller
The main image holder i think is too big. You have to make its maller.Other There is a luck of small style details
Generally the design dosen't have a character. It is a little "flat" to obvious maybe you have to go back to the drawing board and start making small detail additions. The main menu is something that you can enhance also the icons for the services need a small boast. Maybe you have to divide the page with some extra lines or different background color.Summary:
Has some promise, but needs some extra work. Was a pleasure to review!
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David Babinec commented:thank you very much for this review! i try change it and upload here new version
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Positive Feature Clean and Simple
I like that its clean and simple.New Idea Sub page "Few words block"
I think that this could use some more attention. Perhaps encasing it with a subtle background to bring it out a bit more.Blocks on home page are a bit to much.
I think it was already noted that the blocks were a bit larger then maybe needed. I would suggest halving the size of them and perhaps even grouping them as a bar to create a level of separation.Summary:
Overall I think the site is very simple. I feel it needs something to make it feel more unique, that could be simply adding some sort of violations out of the design to get out of the complete box feel.
Minor Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 too stocky photo (FPOs I would imagine) Minor Problem on 02_aboutus.jpg 1 I don't love the treatment Positive Feature on 01_homepage.jpg 1 Magic! Positive Feature on 02_aboutus.jpg 1 nice header area 2 I usually don't like seeing a three column module placed below a one column module. This treatment however is very visually pleasing Summary:
- Both templates are perfectly balanced
- The landing page has a wonderful banner treatment
Overall - this is very nicely designed.
- Both templates are perfectly balanced
Minor Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 I don't like the border on the images. Serious Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 Try aligning this text to the right 2 Too much space between paragraphs. Try placing the link underneath the text. Critical Problem on 01_homepage.jpg 1 I think this image doesn't work really well. Since the image is going to be a big part of the design I would try to find something different and more pleasing. 2 I think you should really think about designing a proper logo, this will add your design the spark that's missing. Positive Feature on 01_homepage.jpg 1 I like this, the icons work! Summary:
I like the simplicity of the design but I think it's way too simple. It lacks details on several areas. I would also add more white space to the sides. Keep up the good work!
Summary:
Align elements. Work with grid system if you have to. Check SPELLING errors, i.e. Potential not Potencial... Overall, just scrutinize your work before submitting it anywhere. You can get better if you focus on design principals. They are essential.
Minor Problem Background
1. Try with different background...Grey main frame
1. A less grey main frame...
