ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem I woulld find a way to arrange it vertically so bot elements are aligned with the left side text Serious Problem spacing issues- the other images have more space at the bottom too much spacing compared to the other texts on the side bar please check: http://webtypography.net/Rhythm_and_Proportion/Vertical_Motion/2.2.2/ Critical Problem spacing issue - be consistent spacing issue be consistent with spacing vertical spacing consistency issue readability issue - you need to create more contrast between font and backgroud -
Martin Omaga commented:Meanwhile, we´ve changed the content picture (it was mostly to make space) to a dynamic slideshow. But even so, thanks for the note!
there are serious vertical spacing issues that affect hierarchy. Please check http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/design-theory/understanding-visual-hierarchy-in-web-design/ Critical Problem on http://sofrancesinhas.com/listings/restaurante_farol/ 1 I think it needs more vertical space Positive Feature I like it This area is nicely executed New Idea nice ideea but you cannot read the message easyly due to contrast issues. You can try to alter the backgound to make it stand out more -
Martin Omaga commented:
Meanwhile, we´ve changed the content picture (it was mostly to make space) to a dynamic slideshow. But even so, thanks for the note!
you need a more serious footer check: http://ui-patterns.com/collections/fat-footer/entry/16 Summary:
Hi Martin,
You are on the right path. But there are some spacing/consistency issues that affect the design’s aesthetics and overall feel ( right now it looks a bit crowded thus, old).
I gave you a few examples in the notes. I hope my review helped.
Regard,
Cip
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Martin Omaga commented:
Great review. In fact, when we have so much things to do, there´s always issues to fix that we don´t see. Like the ones that you´ve reviewed...
Thanks!
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Minor Problem Increase spacing Critical Problem Make sure this title extends all the way to the end of this section!!! this looks very sloppy. Minor Problem I would try to remove the padding to the left of this button, might just be a small thing but little details can really make or break a site. Try to add a little padding to the bottom of the text here, it is not lining up with the text over to the left and makes it a little clumsy. This should be a simple CSS fix Serious Problem I would try to make the edges of these elements all line up, makes for a better 'flow' when viewing he site and looks more professional, placement of features looks good though. same alignment issue, the orange bar being shorter distracts the eye and disrupts the natural flow. Positive Feature Logo
Logo looks great and professional, it stands out and works well with the siteSummary:
Other than a few alignment issues I think it looks great, the colors pop and it gets the message across of what you are about.
Inner pages look great, aside from the top header being wider than everything like on the home pages. Placement of elements works well.
I would make a more colorful default image for those place with no images, maybe a image of the food or something that is not so bland until they all get photos, just because there seem to be good amount that do not have images.
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Martin Omaga commented:
Thanks for the review! It´s very useful, specially the suggestion to add more colour to the default image.
Thanks!
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Serious Problem on http://www.sofrancesinhas.com 1 yellow does not work 2 yellow doesn't work 3 yellow doesn't work 4 yellow does not work Critical Problem on http://www.sofrancesinhas.com 1 white type unreadable 2 white type unreadable 3 white type unreadable 4 white type unreadable 5 white type unreadable 6 white type unreadable 7 white type unreadable 8 white type unreadable Positive Feature on http://www.sofrancesinhas.com 1 Good banner Positive Feature on http://sofrancesinhas.com/listings/restaurante_farol/ 1 works well Summary:
Overall - this is a good website.
- You need to address all of the typography issues
- The banner works well
- The colors don't really work well.
Good luck
But you see the spacing issues in the webbrowser? Because in our webbrowser (IE and Firefox) the spacing is very different (and more arranged), than the print screen above. (we´ve realized that when ConceptFeedback auto snapped the website, is a little different (the spaces and alignment) comparing to what we see when we open the website in the browser. Do you see the layout in the webrowser exactly like the pics above?