ZoomConcept Reviews
New Idea on az_card.png 1 you know, it ocurrs to me that if you where to "ever so slightly" curve the diagonal of the Z it cold also suggest a C!...but don't mind me I always destroy my logo designs by making them do way too much. I actually love you logo as it is.. brilliant simplicity. 2 I wonder if the overall design might benefit from a little air? al the way around?..hmmmm..maybe not Other on az_card.png 1 very cool dude! why is he pissed off though? he looks like he is going to kick my ass! Summary:
Cute, hip, youthful, imaginative, whimsical, yet somehow businesslike. Well done.
In fact so cool I just had to make my own Aaran style toon (best I can anyway).
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Alex Colina commented:HA HA HA HA HA LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Alex Colina commented:
you are not getting another star until I get another one of those achingly cute and funny New Zealand insults!!! I am changing my facebook status to cheeky bugger!
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Aaran Casey commented:
Oi, vote it up!
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Alex Colina commented:
I did!!! I did!!! I was just kidding
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Alex Colina commented:
SOOO Cool I just had to make my own...not quite so good..but..
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Aaran Casey commented:
That's awesome, you should use him as your profile pic!
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Michael Rawlins commented:Dude - that's awesome!!!
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Summary:
Hi Aaran,
Top notch job on your business card. The only thing I suggest is putting more white space between your illustration of yourself's shoe and your bottom link.
Other than that, man this is good.
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Aaran Casey commented:
Cheers Jamal
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Aaran Casey commented:
vote it up!
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Jamal Jackson commented:huh?
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Aaran Casey commented:
don't mind me Jamal, I can't count
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Positive Feature on az_card.png 1 great balance and tension Summary:
Dude - you nailed this...
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Great illustration to go with those typography. Nice work!
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Aaran Casey commented:
vote it up!
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Aaran Casey commented:
Thanks
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Positive Feature Love it!
I like your character :)Summary:
Awesome businesscard! but i think it is just a bit too crowded on the left side..but anyway, cool avatar!
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Aaran Casey commented:
vote it up!
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Positive Feature on az_card.png 1 love him! Summary:
I loved your caricature the 1st time I saw him!!! He's so sexy in 'Rated G' kinda way!
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Aaran Casey commented:
You will get me in trouble!
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Aaran Casey commented:
vote it up! - C'mon...
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Rebecca Perry commented:I did! :-)
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Minor Problem on az_card.png 1 there should be some more whitespace between the shoe and last link Other on az_card.png 1 are the shoes even visible here? 2 is this readable? 3 are the icons easy to read? Summary:
Looks nice :)
However in the small size preview you have attached it looks like some details are hard to see/read (I am pretty sure you did it just to prevent of receiving negative feedback... Evil you!)
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Aaran Casey commented:
Exactly!
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Aaran Casey commented:
vote it up!
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Martin Bloksa commented:Pay me!
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Alex Colina commented:
yeah! that' what i should have said!
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Summary:
Very clean business card dude. My only concern would be how it translates in print. I find it a bit hard to read in some areas.
Re; the profile pic - are all NZ hobbits?
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Aaran Casey commented:
yes we are all 4ft nothing, and look like potatoes... mmmm potatoes...
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Minor Problem on az_card.png 1 need more space 2 and more space here too! Summary:
The illustration and colors are great. It just need more margins in the left and right side so it would look it was cut short.
Positive Feature on az_card.png 1 Really like the caricature feature! Makes the card more personal, and sets it apart from the typical logo/text combos out there! I must say that he does look a little mischievous though (its the eyes!) Is this what you were going for? I like it all the same, nice work! New Idea on az_card.png 1 I really like the "AZ" element, but maybe its subtle colour scheme lacks a bit of life when compared to the energetic fonts and fun Caricature. I think its just the lighter shade of blue which is what is causing the problem?! Can't put my finger on it. 2 If you are going to use a light font like this on a white background will you emboss/raise the text on the card? Might be a nice touch?! -
Aaran Casey commented:
I had thought about that...
Summary:
Really nice concept. Caricature really adds, but the AZ logo needs work to get it up to speed with the fun fonts and caricature. Excellent work for the first version!!!
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Rebecca Perry commented:
fabulous review
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Chris Griffin commented:Thanks
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Aaran Casey commented:
Chris thanks for the review, I'll be looking out for your concepts!
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Minor Problem Logo
white text in the logo is not so greatPositive Feature Logo
Just not doin it for me.Summary:
Over all a good try. I like the little guy, though he seems out of place.
Minor Problem Not enough info relating to Aaran's services
There could be more iconographical work to clue people into what Aaran's services are.-
Aaran Casey commented:
it's a business card not a website
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Tim Martin commented:I understand that this is a business card, and a nice looking one at that, but I'm saying there's nothing on the card to clue people into the fact that your a designer (aside from reading the subtext). It's not necessary but check this one out with the pencil treatment: http://justcreativedesign.com/wp-content/gallery/print-designs/jcd-business-card.jpg
Subtext font color is too light
The gray treatment is too light to be read easily. Especially since this what informs the reader what Aaron's services are-
Aaran Casey commented:
what Grey treatment are you referring to?
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Tim Martin commented:
All your secondary text, AZCreative, design, usbility
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Aaran Casey commented:
Ah ok, well the treatment is actually very readable in the illustrator file, unfortunately not here...but I get your point
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gimme all 5's - cheeky bugger!