ZoomConcept Reviews
Critical Problem on logo_icon.jpg 1 I know this is supposed to show the negative space of a an "icon" but it just looks like a batman symbol to me. Positive Feature on logo_icon.jpg 1 Font - too old school, not appropriate IMHO for "young entrepreneurs" look some better fonts, that are more fitting Summary:
Ok, this is all very well and nice, but to be honest it doesn't really fit the target of the "young entrepreneurs", the symbol is ok, but have you looked at this in all black, because if you did, Batman might take you to court for copyright...
Jokes aside, it's not that inspiring, suggest you re-think the strategy on this one, and go back to pen and paper...
Good Luck!
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Aaran Casey commented:Too true, too true!
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Luke Marohn commented:na na na na na na na na BATMAN! LOL. Thats my facebook status right there good sir.
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Critical Problem Wait..it's a bird..but where is it's body?
Frankly, that was my first impression. It looked as if the body of the bat is missing and we get to see 2 wings. The image does not convey any meaning to the target audience or should I say, it does not suit well. You would have to work on that image.Positive Feature Good colors
The colors are good and pleasing to eye. Try increasing the intensity of grey color and see how it works.New Idea Idea for the image
Join those 2 images i.e. instead of retaining the gap between them, just bring them closer so that they look connected. Next, rotate the image 90 degrees clockwise direction and you have a new image. Try experimenting with different shades, gradients, textures for this. Also try to add more features to this image so that it conveys appropriate meaning.Summary:
Good choice of colors, but the image seriously needs rework. It does not convey the intended meaning and looks too bland. Try to focus more on the image and play with different versions before settling on one.
New Idea on logo_icon.jpg 1 I like the size of the font, but I think you could find a more interesting serif font. I'm always amazed at the detail in font when I see it really big. Other on logo_icon.jpg 1 I didn't see the wings at first. I thought it was just an abstract design. The negative space looks like a person to me. Summary:
The "developers & promoters" text would quickly become too small if the logo was shrunk down.
Minor Problem on logo_icon.jpg 1 I dont quite get the significance of this part. I doesnt really fit with the rest of your logo. Summary:
Hello, Suresh
I'm trying to figure out if what kind of look your going for. The Word ICON and the subheading look good together and give it a very professional feel but then when I see the lime green wing looking part it takes that away. I hope this helps.
Minor Problem on logo_icon.jpg 1 Perfect balance with the word above - but it should not span beyond the visual boundaries of the "I" and the "N". If you accomplish that natural framing of those words - you will establish a nice area to the left to drop a shape Positive Feature on logo_icon.jpg 1 Trajan Roman is timeless as a font. I would kern between the "O" & the "N" - it's a bit off. New Idea on logo_icon.jpg 1 this shape is too minimal - too distracting... I encourage you to explore a circular shape (repeating the wonderful counter shape created by the Trajan Roman font) Summary:
Simply put - please gain some insight about how to execute timeless logos from one of the world greatest font designers John Stevens. Even though all of John's work is hand-lettered - it illustrates how beautiful and timeless Trajan Roman (a derivation of Times Roman and Palatino fonts).
Enjoy!
Minor Problem Young?
Depending on the personalities of these young entrepreneurs this doesn't really seem like a young kind of logo, although it is fitting for real estate so I think I can see where you were trying to goCritical Problem Agree with above
I agree with the previous statements about the Batman resemblancePositive Feature Use of Fonts
I like the use of the fonts and the spacingSummary:
Sometimes it's easiest to go back to the drawing board! Not trying to be mean or anything, I find that sometimes starting over helps me steer away from heading in the same direction. Good luck!
I think that Bacardi has some good lawyers too :D http://en.wikivisual.com/images/c/c7/Bacardi.Logo.jpg