ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 If this is part of the page, I would just allign it with the middle so it sits underneath the text -
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Steve Mingo commented:yes that bit, I wasn't sure if it was some sort of pop-up over the top or something, aligning it more will look nice =]
Good idea on having the twitter box there btw,
Positive Feature on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Simple colour scheme, I like it! Other on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Not sure about these, from afar it does resemble a female body part! But the concept of using "line drawings" is a really good look. -
Ashley F commented:
hahaha i never really noticed that before
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Haider Ali commented:I noticed it too ;)
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Great design, see my comments for the bit about the line drawings. The colour scheme works, its simple and its ready to roll! The only overall criticism I have is that it doesn't say anywhere what the business is for, but perhaps this was intentional.
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Ashley F commented:
Thanks a bunch!
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Minor Problem on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Center these words... You've probably done this to carry through the playful theme. It distracts from the wonderful illustration above it. Serious Problem on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Move lower to establish a cohesive unit. Critical Problem on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Not a great color background Positive Feature on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 I love these! 2 Seems randomly placed - and the type is too small. If this is deliberate - it's unnecessary Summary:
- Playful is hard - strive for a single element to depict that playful spirit. It's like a comedian using subtle humor... I'm confident that you've achieved it with rounded illustration (I think they are wonderful)
- The social media icons on the left are distracting because of the color background. Also, your url is too difficult to read in that orientation. I encourage you to abandon that approach (you're making the users work to hard to read something that's most like not functional)
- The bottom portion of the screen simply doesn't work.. Needs to be reworked.
- The "Coming Soon" area needs to be integrated with the rest of the content elements.
I hope this helps...
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Ashley F commented:
It helps a lot! Thanks, I'm working on improving all these things to make a more permanent page (as permanent as a web site could be, anyway haha)
- Playful is hard - strive for a single element to depict that playful spirit. It's like a comedian using subtle humor... I'm confident that you've achieved it with rounded illustration (I think they are wonderful)
Minor Problem on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 What is this doing above the other stuff? This banner looks weird all separated at the top. Make the background extend to the top and it will look MUCH better. 2 Strange drawing..honestly thought it was a pair of boobs at first. New Idea on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 I like this sidebar, but what if you extended it the whole length of the page from top to bottom. Summary:
It's a coming soon page so it's supposed to look rough...but I find this a bit too rough for my tastes.
Positive Feature Creative!
Very creative! Good job!Summary:
I must say, this is good! You know how you can make this better?
Get rid of the twitter, and instead, put a small link that says "what's rounded"?
Upon clicking, a box fades in and basically describes your company. Something like:
"We are rounded. All-rounded. Designing, Development, marketing. To view our work..."
something along those lines.
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Ashley F commented:
Great idea! Thanks for suggesting it, I'll be sure to keep it in mind :)
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Gaurav Mali commented:you are welcome! send me a link when you finalize/publish your design :)
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Ashley F commented:
of course :)
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Serious Problem Need I say more?
What do I think of when I glance at this design?Other Necessary?
not sure if a coming soon page is really necessary.Positive Feature on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 It does like a female body part. But keep that because you might pull lot of curious people! Summary:
sorry but your logo doesnt tell me much about your business. so that to me is no good. With regards to the two circles, what are they representing? Can you give some background?
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sorry i thought it posted but something must have gone wrong. reposting:
overall this is a nice splash page, and should be effective for directing folks to your social media. for some reason the top 'coming soon' banner feels a little like it's just hanging out there though- you might consider extending the dark background a little higher.
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Rebecca Perry commented:where's your review? in order to get feedback, you have to provide feedback.
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Other on http://www.somewhatrounded.com 1 Why did you put it that close to the twitter icon in the left sidebar? I would keep those social media icons grouped and use it only once (in the left sidebar) Summary:
I would align the box on the bottom of the screen with the main text (Somewhat rounded) and play some more with rounded corners in the details.
The concepts needs to be developed a bit more but keep on the good work ;)
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Ashley F commented:
Thanks Gert!
Just to clarify about the "...play some more with rounded corners in the details." you mean the boxes?
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the twitter box?