ZoomConcept Reviews
Serious Problem on layout.png 1 What exactly should be this, a testimonial? You should be more clear, as you should include from which person/company the testimonial is. As from a design perspective, the circular shape pretty much limits the length of the actual testimonial text. You would probably not ask the client to give a feedback with exact amount of words, just to fit into the bubble :) Maybe try with a rectangular shape with curved angles. Summary:
Well this feels like an improvement from the previous version. Space is definitively more organized this time, especially the footer area, but excluding the bubble.
Minor Problem on layout.png 1 Make sure to add as much as posible information about person who gives this feedback/testimonial... The more information about that person more persuative is the quote 2 i dont like that much this active navigation effect in this case... try looking for someother solutiion at paterntap or other inspirational sites Positive Feature on layout.png 1 Done good 2 Good move with background... now it is way easier to scan the site... it is now intuitive and everybody knows what is header/content/footer Other on layout.png 1 How does these icons look without inner shadow effect? Give it a try ;) 2 I know I am right now opossiting myself but, after this background revision (no background) it might look better with exterior slider navigation as used before... which will also lead to clear 3 collumn layout and easier visual movement... Summary:
Hey there,
You have made some good edits since last version, now there are just last few details that can be changed before coding the layout
Good job Vitor and of course good luck ;)
Serious Problem on layout.png 1 make sure you have a highlighting strategy to indicate location. Notice the uploaded sample. Positive Feature on layout.png 1 Super graphics... 2 I like this for testimonials Summary:
Significant improvement over the last round.
- Strong visual hierarchy
- Easy to access carousel area
- Buttons have great SNR
Great job! I'd love to see level two and three templates.
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Minor Problem Logo Size
You have a nice logo that appeals to the web industry. I don't like the size of the header and feel it prevents users from seeing as much page information as they can before the fold. I recommend you make the logo smaller, and bring up the nav items a bitAppearance of Buttons
The buttons look a little 2005-2006. I feel the rounded corners and the bubbly highlight were a trend back then, and you can improve your site by changing them. If you go with something more simple, there's a higher chance of them appearing timeless, and still offers the same degree of clickability to the usersPositive Feature Slider
The slider is simple and to the point. It's also original with the cool borders on the top and bottom. Well doneNew Idea Footer
Footer looks nice, except for the speech bubble. Maybe try a gray speech bubble and a rectangle with round corners instead of an ellipse shape, so you can match the top edge of the bubble with the heading "Novidades do blog"Summary:
Hi Vitor,
Overall, not too bad. Biggest pointer for me is to watch your sizing. The header and the top call-to-action button are quite large. Good luck!
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Vitor Marcellino commented:Amazing feedback Robin, thank you so much!
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Critical Problem Where are the turtles heading ? The eyes follow their direction. Positive Feature The site has a pleasant look. New Idea I would use more contrast in the header. Why don't use the turtles to point to something important ? Minor Problem on layout.png 1 This space could have been better used...or maybe the speech bubble could have been more interesting. Positive Feature on layout.png 1 Loved the logo! Very appealing! New Idea on layout.png 1 Can more little color in the footer. Its not visible I feel. Summary:
Use a different image in place of turtles and remove the bubble from the footers. You can also try shades of green and blue that will work well with your website design.
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If I did have something to ask you to improve on.. maybe try to put the menu on the left, and the logo on the right.
Just something to try out.
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this is picky, but I would adjust the spacing so that all the elements line up on the outer edges- see attached
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Minor Problem Menu
I think the menu could use a little treatment. Maybe add some separators or change the hover color, it's almost invisibleSerious Problem Shadows
I still think the shadows under the buttons look weird. Maybe try to fade it a little bit or just get rid of them.Positive Feature Icons
I like the icons for the text.Summary:
This is better than the last one you posted. The design is shaping up nicely.
Minor Problem on layout.png 1 It does not have a clear goal - because of the dummy text 2 add more contrast to mark the active page Positive Feature on layout.png 1 Showing current work off => Good ! but mention it is your work, give it a title and add a link to your portfolio page Summary:
The concept looks already great (my humble opinion) - The F layout drags people to the call to action buttons.
I would not use the text-balloon in the footer. It somehow does not fit in the rest of the design. Perhaps because it does not have a clear goal at this moment.
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Vitor Marcellino commented:
Hi Gert, thanks for your feedback. The baloon is supposed to hold some testmonials. Looking at the full concept as a small image i do agree that it doesn
t fit. What I did was insert an white graphic in the footer so it wouldnt be too busy. And it worked, when I had 3 blocks full of text it was somehow annoying me because of the amount of content. Then i came with this idea, but i think I have to work a little more on this. (just explaining why it is there). Thanks :)
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