ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 overstylized...remove background - see attachment for some example 2 again... I feel like this is overstylized... you should try some simplicity... Why did you come up with wood idea? there is no wood on photo (floor doesnt count) 3 i would remove this too 4 it may sound crazy but I would continue making it simplier here too, loosing these stripes 5 why so tiny font? 6 move this navigation to footer 7 footer is great area to come with some creativity... leaving it this empty and unuseable is a pitty :( Positive Feature on ecodesign.jpg 1 looks good! 2 good photo Summary:
Hey there,
Generally i do like this concept a lot but there are some unnecesary overstylized details while this site needs simplicity (set by photo and logo you are using). Simply try folowing the style usedn in photo in your design. Simplicity...
I have also added some notes
Good luck ;)
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Martin Bloksa commented:Oh, and dont forget to add Call to action! ;)
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David St commented:
ok. thks!!
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Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 too stylized 2 Great banner area - but is there enough for "call to action content" 3 Type too dark... increase contrast 4 Needs a fat footer (as a WordPress template, I wold expect to see that) -
David St commented:
Thanks! i completely forgot that!
Positive Feature on ecodesign.jpg 1 Handsome controls 2 this module design works 3 Love this module!!! Summary:
Really professionally presented.
I only have some minor nits to consider.
- Careful not to over stylize
- Reserve real estate for the call to action
- I'd love to see color themes applied (do you have plans for that?)
I love your work!
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David St commented:
Thanks, for your comments. I do have plans for colors, at this time finishing up the all design.
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Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 You might want to add a cool >on mouse over effect 2 these are 3 pics or just one? If there are 3 different pics try separating themn somehow 3 how will a larger screen see this? If this is a template and this image is changing ( is part of a slider), you might want to ancapsulate it somehow Critical Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 remove texture 2 fonts are to small 3 Too moch texture. Less is better;) Positive Feature on ecodesign.jpg 1 Nice 2 Cool choice of color, you migh want to incease the size of the small font a bit New Idea on ecodesign.jpg 1 remove texture, it gives an urban feel and uses space. You may want to put text here 2 You should use this space better( try adding links, copyrights...) Summary:
Your design looks pretty cool, the arrangement is nice but you should try to remove some of the textures and increase some fonts. Please check my suggestions. I hope they helped.
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David St commented:
I do appreciate your feedback, i have removed the texture .. "less is better" also thanks for the slider comment will see the way to encapsulate nor put a frame around it.
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Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 Consider having only one line instead of three. Serious Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 Doesn't flow with the site design. Consider removing the wood background. 2 Again, doesn't flow. Try removing the wood things and the green block. You might consider making the background of this text-block to a lighter grey. Positive Feature on ecodesign.jpg 1 Really nice image! 2 Good! New Idea on ecodesign.jpg 1 Hmm... Try putting something here, the white-space is a little unbalanced. Other on ecodesign.jpg 1 I don't understand what this is. Summary:
Very nice, but there are a few elements that do not flow well. I understand that it is an eco-website, but the wood just doesn't fit.
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David St commented:
Thanks, that's what i was thinking about the wood texture, and the footer 1 line.
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Summary:
Wood background is really bad. Too much of green (I know its ECO Design, still it doesn't suit), visual clutter.
Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 Have you tried using dark color for the menu? 2 don't like how this colors work. Serious Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 you should really look into redesigning this. maybe instead of using the line spacer on the right. use little rounded box-es around the numbers. Positive Feature Hi. your design is not bad but i would improve on this details that i have squared. cheers Summary:
I like the layout and the concept of how it will look online. However I think the wood and screens are ugly! Why not try just making them flat colours or with a little gradient in the same colour scheme.
The diagonal lines in the middle box can be removed. The army green color box with screws could just be a box. I think just use colours to let it be subtle and elegant, the wood looks old and the image of the kitchen is ultra modern. I the white section down the bottom. Try more line height on the copy and headings.
Overall a great layout. You just need to work on the finer details!
Minor Problem on ecodesign.jpg 1 change font, maybe use a darker color Positive Feature on ecodesign.jpg 1 too much open space, maybe try moving the flash bar under the big header and maybe loose the stripes 2 love the big header, clean and descriptive 3 love this part New Idea on ecodesign.jpg 1 maybe drop the wood panel and just leave the grey background Summary:
Nice design, I love it and there is not much to improve in my oppinion. Keep up the good job.
Positive Feature Clean and Clear
Great example of clean and clear. Too many people just plunk boxes on flat backgrounds. You have added perfect texture to the site.New Idea Middle third
The content box Bienvenidos a Eco Design is well conceived, but the whole row seems like a wasted element? That's pretty valuable real estate on a webpage to have nothing...Summary:
Totally aligns with the product and their brand.
Bravo!
Thanks! great feedback that's what i was thinking have some simplicity on it!