| Minor Problem on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | hard to read |
| 2 | not getting the "connectors" |
Professionally executed wireframe - but:
I hope this helps...
checkout www.fivesecondtest.com (it's free) - and it helps you understand what a visitor can view (and retain) in 5 seconds. If you try it - send me the link (I can send it around...)
Michael, this is http://fivesecondtest.com/test/-bpXwFscl6YAqa79
great... do another one, with the question. what do you remember?
means?
Let me show you. I'll send you findings after it gets ten responses. It that ok for me to test it?
yup, really cool site. thanks for sharing with me
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking this link finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking the finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking the finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
| Minor Problem on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | Improve the visibility of these icons. Social media sites are the best way to engage existing customers and also the new one more easily. |
| 2 | Not appealing |
| Positive Feature on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | attention Grabber! |
| 2 | This is good! When you say FAT FREE, you have shown them the calorie content clearly. |
The best thing of this design layout is that it really goes good with 100% Veg. The veggie people are surely going to get attracted :) But one of the most of important element missing from the page is - call to action. What is the next action you want your visitors to take when they arrive at the page? Because when you show an appealing image to your visitors, they are surely going to expect "how would they grab it".
Hope this helps.
Good work. Keep Going!
Thanks Ebrandz. Yours feedback Important to me.
just curious as to why the 5 reviews you "haven't" made are all empty?
sad
Thanks. Next time i develop my designs :)
I don't think he understands, let's face it he posts a picture of a KFC burger that's supposed to be a vegi burger, and it has bacon in it, how's tht a vegi burger, like his empty reviews there's no thought in it
there's all these newbies lately posting up concepts and yet all leave reviews that are blank just to get the 5 minimum. then they expect quality reviews!
yeah it's high;y frustrating, but until Andrew and Aurimus, figure out how to fix it, this is the only way to handle it
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| Minor Problem on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | Hmm... The text is a little difficult to read because of the reflection |
| 2 | I think that this is spelled incorrectly.
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| Positive Feature on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | Nice image!
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| 2 | Really nice footer! |
| New Idea on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | Instead of having the KFC person twice, maybe put "KFC" somewhere else. |
| 2 | This might go near the nutrition facts |
| 3 | Maybe have the clouds look like clouds... Just a thought. |
| Other on sample1.jpg | |
| 1 | What's this?
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Overall, very nice. A little cluttered, I don't think that the nutrition facts needs to be on the front page.
| Critical Problem | |
Nothing to doLike previously stated, there's no Call to Action, for promoting something there should be some interaction | |
| New Idea | |
InfographicConcentrate more on the burger and make the text around it less distracting/conflicting | |
I do believe this is a good start, it just needs to be planned a little further and executed a little better
Michael, really thanks. I'm work on yours points. Actually this is just one page website...