ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on sample1.jpg 1 hard to read 2 not getting the "connectors" Summary:
Professionally executed wireframe - but:
- What is the call to action? Why not offer a coupon (capture email addresses - and demonstrate ROI immediately)
- Affordance issues: What is clickable on this page?
- Keep the whimsical, playful presentation - the colors are perfect.
- The "Delish Juicy Wow" is too stylized - and requires too much work to read. It's really not that important, so it detracts from the VEG ZINGER. If you can eliminate - do so (it's more conducive to a print ad)
I hope this helps...
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Michael Rawlins commented:checkout www.fivesecondtest.com (it's free) - and it helps you understand what a visitor can view (and retain) in 5 seconds. If you try it - send me the link (I can send it around...)
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Ram Mehra commented:
Michael, this is http://fivesecondtest.com/test/-bpXwFscl6YAqa79
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Michael Rawlins commented:
great... do another one, with the question. what do you remember?
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Ram Mehra commented:
means?
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Michael Rawlins commented:
Let me show you. I'll send you findings after it gets ten responses. It that ok for me to test it?
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Ram Mehra commented:
yup, really cool site. thanks for sharing with me
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Michael Rawlins commented:
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking this link finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
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Michael Rawlins commented:
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking the finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
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Michael Rawlins commented:
View the results: http://fivesecondtest.com/test/share/RAN5Db47V_uKOwQd
Right now - the findings illustrate that: - respondents see the KFC logo - most see and remember the product name - respondents don't see "Natural lovers" - all have missed "Delish, Juicy Wow"
Keep checking the finding report link until it hits 20 responses (the test will close automatically at the point it hits 20 respondents).
Minor Problem on sample1.jpg 1 Improve the visibility of these icons. Social media sites are the best way to engage existing customers and also the new one more easily. 2 Not appealing Positive Feature on sample1.jpg 1 attention Grabber! 2 This is good! When you say FAT FREE, you have shown them the calorie content clearly. Summary:
The best thing of this design layout is that it really goes good with 100% Veg. The veggie people are surely going to get attracted :) But one of the most of important element missing from the page is - call to action. What is the next action you want your visitors to take when they arrive at the page? Because when you show an appealing image to your visitors, they are surely going to expect "how would they grab it".
Hope this helps.
Good work. Keep Going!
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Ram Mehra commented:
Thanks Ebrandz. Yours feedback Important to me.
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Summary:
just curious as to why the 5 reviews you "haven't" made are all empty?
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Martin Bloksa commented:sad
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Ram Mehra commented:
Thanks. Next time i develop my designs :)
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Aaran Casey commented:I don't think he understands, let's face it he posts a picture of a KFC burger that's supposed to be a vegi burger, and it has bacon in it, how's tht a vegi burger, like his empty reviews there's no thought in it
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Rebecca Perry commented:there's all these newbies lately posting up concepts and yet all leave reviews that are blank just to get the 5 minimum. then they expect quality reviews!
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Aaran Casey commented:
yeah it's high;y frustrating, but until Andrew and Aurimus, figure out how to fix it, this is the only way to handle it
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Martin Bloksa commented:
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Minor Problem on sample1.jpg 1 Hmm... The text is a little difficult to read because of the reflection 2 I think that this is spelled incorrectly. -
Aaran Casey commented:
spot on it's potato
Positive Feature on sample1.jpg 1 Nice image! -
Aaran Casey commented:
except this is NOT a veg burger!
2 Really nice footer! New Idea on sample1.jpg 1 Instead of having the KFC person twice, maybe put "KFC" somewhere else. 2 This might go near the nutrition facts 3 Maybe have the clouds look like clouds... Just a thought. Other on sample1.jpg 1 What's this? -
Aaran Casey commented:
a green dot within a green square
Summary:
Overall, very nice. A little cluttered, I don't think that the nutrition facts needs to be on the front page.
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Critical Problem Nothing to do
Like previously stated, there's no Call to Action, for promoting something there should be some interactionNew Idea Infographic
Concentrate more on the burger and make the text around it less distracting/conflictingSummary:
I do believe this is a good start, it just needs to be planned a little further and executed a little better
Michael, really thanks. I'm work on yours points. Actually this is just one page website...