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Minor Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 It fades to white.. do you want that? I think it should just fade into the background. Positive Feature on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Love the font, and stark contrast Other on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 This should hopefully look cool rolled over (JQuery Fade?) 2 same here, make em cool when rolled over 3 Working on a new and cooler website stay TUNED! -
Josh Jackson commented:Good eye. While we're at it. Punctuation is needed after COOLER WEBSITE--either a period or semicolon.
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Hey Julio, really sweet design you have going on, the fonts and the textures are amazing, not too sure about the colors though.
I think you should go with opposing colors to get some more contrast, Maybe change the backrgound to a blue? or the buttons to a purple?
(i think a blue background would look better though) also, who is the target market?
If its for designers, then the freebies thing is fine, although i would post some images of the freebies as an incentive.
If its targeted at customers, make that a contact form.
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Josh Jackson commented:
Good suggestions regarding contrast, Luke.
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Julio Rivera commented:cheers thanks for the feedback. all great
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Luke Marohn commented:Thank you :D
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Minor Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Agree with Luke, this would be even nicer with a rollover effect 2 TUNED - As per Luke's keen eye! 3 Submit button looks a bit flat, maybe give it the same treatment as the orange on the orange on the logo, in the test tube Serious Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 This looks odd... make it fade to clear not white 2 Padding! Make it the same between "mydesign7" and the "enter your email box" New Idea on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 like the logo, although it's a repeat of underworld magazines, might pay to make it significantly different Summary:
Overall a really clean design, and not much to critique...
Just being picky really!
Great Job!
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Julio Rivera commented:
thanks for the feedback. underworldmagazines and mydesign7 is going to be part of a network so the logos will look alike.
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Summary:
(MYDESIGN7 or MyDesign7 or Mydesign7)
Hi Julio,
You really have a very good start here and I wouldn't go over what others have already said but my observation not noted in there:
For consistency sake, I'm curious to know, what name are you using in your logotype?
MYDESIGN7 or MyDesign7 or Mydesign7?
Besides, it repeats 4 times on the page.
Excellent job done all the same and we await for the website layout itself.
All the best.
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Julio Rivera commented:
lol good catch lol
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Minor Problem SignUp White Edge
Not sure if this shows up in the design files but the white edges on the left & right of the SignUp form look a little weird. If this blended transparently into the background it would look more slick.-
Julio Rivera commented:
yea I had a stoke on it that's what made it look white just took it off. thanks
New Idea Font Type for Footer
Only other thing I would improve is maybe trying a slightly different font for the footer & that's being very picky...Summary:
Love the design, simple, eye-catching & effective. Good job ;)
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Positive Feature looks awesome, my only complaint would be that you should increase the contrast between the text and the background, kinda hard to read on a bright monitor. Other than that tho it looks awesome :) Summary:
looks awesome, my only complaint would be that you should increase the contrast between the text and the background, kinda hard to read on a bright monitor. Other than that tho it looks awesome :)
Minor Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Consider making this line of text just a touch darker perhaps. 2 Have you considered using a bold color here? Maybe use orange here as well? As it stands, I think it gets lost in the colors of the background. I think you could get away with using orange here to draw more attention to this box without upsetting the balance of the composition. Positive Feature on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 I love this. Great layout. It's clean without having a cold, corporate feel. The gradient in the background works perfectly to draw the eye into the center of the design. That's a design element I enjoy using in some of my work. New Idea on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 I read on a blog recently that including a minor description to go with these social media icons has proven to be more beneficial than just lining them up for what they termed a "social slap." In this instance, maybe a rollover that adds a muted hue to the icon and displays a small box that reads, "Find out what MyDesign7 is up to. Follow us/me on Twitter." Just a thought. Other on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Suggestion: I don't have a problem with the color of the background. I'm curious what other colors you tried? I've always thought light silvery/gray pairs well with orange accents. Summary:
Julio: Good job man. I like what you have here and can't wait to see what the real website looks like once you get it designed. Rather than rehash my notes here, I'll just say keep up the good work.
Take care, Josh
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Julio Rivera commented:
Hey thanks for the comments and notes for the Icon I will be coding out a really cool tips js popup thing lol.
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Minor Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 typo? Positive Feature on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 smart illustrated icons 2 Perfect weight - creates energy, and leads the eye to the task. Summary:
Wow!
- Great color balance
- intuitively obvious call to action
- Perfect use of Gestalt principles - this is a holistic design
- texture of background image - plays well with action button
You nailed this one...
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Julio Rivera commented:
thanks =)
Critical Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 I'm 2 I think the 7 should have the same baseline. 3 Working on a new & cooler website... stay tuned! Summary:
I really like the design, I just saw some typo's I thought I'd point out.
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Julio Rivera commented:
yea it was just for the demo.
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Positive Feature on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 I like this icon! 2 Blend in nice with the background... Nice work Other on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Super minor issue (it might not be an issue): You have a Twitter icon, and a @MyDesign7 as well. Maybe only have one or the other... Summary:
The design is fantastic! The background image, right to the edges of the submit button. This is the best-est landing page I've ever seen.
Positive Feature Great minimalism
I think the minimalism of this is effective. Love the limited use of color and the overall monotones. Especially where it looks worn near the form field. Cool effect that, as if lots of people have sent their email address. I do think the "sign up for freebies" sets off a red flag, since it's so general. Another flag for me is in the note "Im available for freelance." The first word is a contraction for "I am" and needs the apostrophe: "I'm." The problem with minimal design is that any typo glares.Summary:
retro is modern today. colors and design are good, it's only a first page. excelent start.
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the font stands out, My Design 7 Everything works fine design wise, the social icons blend in nicely :)
- Peter
Minor Problem on COMING-SOON.jpg 1 Not consistent with names above. Positive Feature Great work
Love the logo and the social icons at the bottom.Summary:
I like the idea; it's pretty simple and straight to the point for people to get freebies but it's not clear what those freebies may be. The design seems to just melt together into a brown heap, perhaps you can use another color rather to bring certain spots out.
Good observation on this. It should just fade into background