ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on businesscard-backoption1.jpg 1 maybe reduce the font size and try accomodating everyting in one line in footer and increase VIDERITY INC size Positive Feature Nice to have an illustration image like this, really appreciate. Quite Innovative New Idea on letterhead-viderity.jpg 1 Put the black line here and include the address and rest of contat details here Instead of on top 2 shift this on the right side where u hav mentioned all the contact details. Other on businesscard-front.jpg 1 This is really looking good. Summary:
Good start.
My views are in form of notes, pls see them.
Hope this helps you
thank you
Minor Problem I dont fancy this font, it doesnt fit the style set by illustration Minor Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg 1 there should seriously be something... maybe try adding again VIDERITY - strategic, creative, technical using really minimalist style... or just hope for miracle, that someone here will give you some good idea for this :D 2 there is a plenty of free space, why using initials? Minor Problem on interior-videritycom-page.png 1 try using different color for this button 2 why not using justified text align? 3 this needs some more spacing... now it just looks messed up... just disturbing, not serving... Positive Feature on businesscard-front.jpg 1 Good one ;) New Idea on businesscard-backoption2.jpg 1 try playing with this... moving elements, increasing decreasing size... maybe font... It might look better Summary:
Well I hope my little feedback will help you somehow, even that I am not experienced in printed graphics....
Generally it is looking good, there are only few details to fix, what is not that big deal
Good luck ;)
Minor Problem Needs one color element - perhaps "Viderity Inc." Serious Problem Try using a font/hand lettering for the name. That organic look is very persuasive (and matches the illustration) Serious Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg 1 This area needs something - ghost image... See uploaded attachment Critical Problem on businesscard-backoption2.jpg 1 needs to line up with bottomline (phone numbers) Positive Feature Good illustration Positive Feature on interior-videritycom-page.png 1 Great balance Positive Feature on businesscard-front.jpg 1 If this is the back of the biz card - GREAT! Other on businesscard-backoption1.jpg 1 I like this layout the least Summary:
- I love the illustration (great trust marker)
- stationary needs some element to add energy...
Overall - great direction...
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Viderity commented:Michael,
Thanks very much for your helpful feedback! What do you think of the revised letterhead uploaded to this concept? It implements a watermark as you suggested.
Gratefully, Rachel
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Michael Rawlins commented:Rachel Watermark is spot on... M
Attached Files:
- I love the illustration (great trust marker)
Minor Problem Letterhead - address etc
Information is squished inside the V - looks bad. Suggest moving it to the bottom of the page. The is a key visual feature that needs to stand alone.Minor Problem on letterhead-revision1.jpg 1 Looks squished - takes impact away from the V. Minor Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg 1 Vertical space between the text is not consistent with the other stationery products. Minor Problem on businesscard-backoption2.jpg 1 If the email address holder is long this could be problematic. Serious Problem V - cut out space at the vertex
The lines are not parallel - this is a serious flaw that needs attention.Serious Problem on letterhead-revision1.jpg 1 Space here is not parallel - looks really bad. Positive Feature Mosaic 'V'
Love it!Positive Feature on letterhead-revision1.jpg 1 Love the V! Positive Feature on interior-videritycom-page.png 1 I like the web page look. Positive Feature on businesscard-backoption1.jpg 1 Like this BC better. New Idea on letterhead-revision1.jpg 1 1) Move address text down here. 2) Make the V extend through the page bottom. Summary:
I like very much all your concepts colours and styles.
The first image header looks very nice, :) I like the pixel background its a good touch.
The website screenshot is very clean and i like how the main content is centered. The left hand side column is fine but you should maybe have the social icons up just a little.
