| Minor Problem on businesscard-backoption1.jpg | |
| 1 | maybe reduce the font size and try accomodating everyting in one line in footer and increase VIDERITY INC size |
| Positive Feature | |
| Nice to have an illustration image like this, really appreciate. Quite Innovative | |
| New Idea on letterhead-viderity.jpg | |
| 1 | Put the black line here and include the address and rest of contat details here Instead of on top |
| 2 | shift this on the right side where u hav mentioned all the contact details. |
| Other on businesscard-front.jpg | |
| 1 | This is really looking good. |
Good start.
My views are in form of notes, pls see them.
Hope this helps you
thank you
| Minor Problem | |
| I dont fancy this font, it doesnt fit the style set by illustration | |
| Minor Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg | |
| 1 | there should seriously be something... maybe try adding again VIDERITY - strategic, creative, technical using really minimalist style...
or just hope for miracle, that someone here will give you some good idea for this :D |
| 2 | there is a plenty of free space, why using initials? |
| Minor Problem on interior-videritycom-page.png | |
| 1 | try using different color for this button |
| 2 | why not using justified text align? |
| 3 | this needs some more spacing... now it just looks messed up... just disturbing, not serving... |
| Positive Feature on businesscard-front.jpg | |
| 1 | Good one ;) |
| New Idea on businesscard-backoption2.jpg | |
| 1 | try playing with this... moving elements, increasing decreasing size... maybe font... It might look better |
Well I hope my little feedback will help you somehow, even that I am not experienced in printed graphics....
Generally it is looking good, there are only few details to fix, what is not that big deal
Good luck ;)
| Minor Problem | |
| Needs one color element - perhaps "Viderity Inc." | |
| Serious Problem | |
| Try using a font/hand lettering for the name. That organic look is very persuasive (and matches the illustration) | |
| Serious Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg | |
| 1 | This area needs something - ghost image... See uploaded attachment |
| Critical Problem on businesscard-backoption2.jpg | |
| 1 | needs to line up with bottomline (phone numbers) |
| Positive Feature | |
| Good illustration | |
| Positive Feature on interior-videritycom-page.png | |
| 1 | Great balance |
| Positive Feature on businesscard-front.jpg | |
| 1 | If this is the back of the biz card - GREAT! |
| Other on businesscard-backoption1.jpg | |
| 1 | I like this layout the least |
Overall - great direction...
Michael,
Thanks very much for your helpful feedback! What do you think of the revised letterhead uploaded to this concept? It implements a watermark as you suggested.
Gratefully, Rachel
Rachel Watermark is spot on... M
| Minor Problem | |
Letterhead - address etcInformation is squished inside the V - looks bad. Suggest moving it to the bottom of the page. The is a key visual feature that needs to stand alone. | |
| Minor Problem on letterhead-revision1.jpg | |
| 1 | Looks squished - takes impact away from the V. |
| Minor Problem on letterhead-viderity.jpg | |
| 1 | Vertical space between the text is not consistent with the other stationery products. |
| Minor Problem on businesscard-backoption2.jpg | |
| 1 | If the email address holder is long this could be problematic. |
| Serious Problem | |
V - cut out space at the vertexThe lines are not parallel - this is a serious flaw that needs attention. | |
| Serious Problem on letterhead-revision1.jpg | |
| 1 | Space here is not parallel - looks really bad. |
| Positive Feature | |
Mosaic 'V'Love it! | |
| Positive Feature on letterhead-revision1.jpg | |
| 1 | Love the V! |
| Positive Feature on interior-videritycom-page.png | |
| 1 | I like the web page look. |
| Positive Feature on businesscard-backoption1.jpg | |
| 1 | Like this BC better. |
| New Idea on letterhead-revision1.jpg | |
| 1 | 1) Move address text down here. 2) Make the V extend through the page bottom. |
I like very much all your concepts colours and styles.
The first image header looks very nice, :) I like the pixel background its a good touch.
The website screenshot is very clean and i like how the main content is centered. The left hand side column is fine but you should maybe have the social icons up just a little.