Concept Reviews
Minor Problem Difficult to read Kerning makes the "fotografie" hard to read Serious Problem Least favorite - too horizontal Positive Feature Great! 2nd Choice Summary:
Good studies...
Check in black and white - at different sizes, to ensure readability
-
Summary:
I like the last one with some tweaks..see my upload.
with the camera concept you do not need the "fotographie" it is redundant.
-
Kim Speleman commented:Thanks, it's a very good proposal.
Attached Files:
-
Summary:
I liked the 3rd version but it is still very difficult to understand.
Here are few points:
- The image of camera is blending into text typography. try something different for camera or use in place of "O" (as you did in last version)
- Fotografic in version 3 and 4 is not readable.
Summary:
From my point of view i do not like the typography and the camera gets you confuse about the name. It looks full, it looks not clean, maybe i would chage the colours combination. Keep rocking!
Tnx for the advice and feedback. I will for sure do your tips.