

| Minor Problem | |
| Difficult to read | |
| Kerning makes the "fotografie" hard to read | |
| Serious Problem | |
| Least favorite - too horizontal | |
| Positive Feature | |
| Great! | |
| 2nd Choice | |
Good studies...
Check in black and white - at different sizes, to ensure readability
I like the last one with some tweaks..see my upload.
with the camera concept you do not need the "fotographie" it is redundant.
Thanks, it's a very good proposal.
I liked the 3rd version but it is still very difficult to understand.
Here are few points:
From my point of view i do not like the typography and the camera gets you confuse about the name. It looks full, it looks not clean, maybe i would chage the colours combination. Keep rocking!
Tnx for the advice and feedback. I will for sure do your tips.